|Reviews for ※ 回想記の夢 ・ A Memoir of a Dream ※|
| Rain of the Forest chapter 11 . 4/6
Okay, check again. Neji has BROWN hair..
| Rain of the Forest chapter 7 . 4/6
Shit... not good...
| Loner Kid chapter 1 . 1/2
weird name..he could easily go as uruna..or...naruko..., though he doesn't really need to change his first name
| Please send me messages chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
| jayley chapter 21 . 11/2/2014
uh oh, naruto's not going to exist now...which means the changes he made wouldn't exist? mind boggled
| Amuto-Narusaku4ever chapter 21 . 10/15/2014
Por favor seguila esta genial !
| Advanced-ZeroX chapter 21 . 10/4/2014
I really want to know where you are going with this! But i wish you would wright a few more scenes of just Naruto, Minato, and Kushina. I want to see Kushina's reaction to Naruto being her son.
| NarutoFan chapter 19 . 8/31/2014
I wouldn't worry to much about not taking the current events of Naruto into account. That is what fanfiction is all about. This is like one of those "What If" fics, where it's like, "What if Naruto ends up in the past? What could happen to his future world if certain events didn't occur, or happened differently?"
I think it's an awesome story so far and would love to read more. You might not own Naruto, but you're certainly owning this story and have created something that could be easily seen happening in the show. Keep up the amazing work!
| Junky chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
Your title means A Dream of a Memoir though...
| Jrod96 chapter 21 . 7/17/2014
| dai sennin kurosaki d naruto chapter 9 . 7/9/2014
i know this is ff but there is no way they would act like this about naruto's status nor the fact that as far as they''re concerned he doesn't exist. he'd be sent off to ibiki straight away. why all the hiding blood tests the seal & the fact that inside is the kyuubi but kushina has the kyuubi too would be enough proof that he is from the future. future knowledge & personal knowledge about jiraiya plus the necklace are also more proof.
| dai sennin kurosaki d naruto chapter 7 . 7/9/2014
stop talking about the characters so vaguely. how many books have you ever read where the author speaks about a character by describing the characters looks, or age, or abilities? i don't recall ever reading any they have names use them it's simpler & smarter you're trying too hard to write well.
| dai sennin kurosaki d naruto chapter 6 . 7/9/2014
hiraishin no jutsu is a lightning style technique the hiraishin is pure fuinjutsu so its not a jutsu so you don't say hiraishin no jutsu.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Im so glad this is "father and son fluff/cuteness/stuff that makes your brain go 'D'AWWWW" because there isn't just enough stories like that! x3 Please keep updating! this cute story **
| hmm chapter 21 . 7/9/2014
You are so slow, it's ridiculous.