Reviews for Itonami no Wakari
Anon chapter 4 . 5/18/2015
The plot was nice but the grammar and all the japanese words ruined it. It wasn't bad but also not one of the greatest. Most people do not understand japanese and nearly half of your story consists of the language. It is also very tiring to go down and see the translation of the word when not understood. If you continue to write your story like this, might as well place it under the japanese category.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
Pls make more stories like this...
I love the story but pls continue this story.
StoryLover chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
... just stick to one language. this japanese or rather anime-hardcore fan thing is annoying and has no reason. just turns me down and i have no more interest of reading this.
RingoY chapter 2 . 1/26/2013
Guest chapter 4 . 8/2/2012
Whoever that guy/girl is he/she is dumb she's stupid f***k her/him in fact some people can still understand this baka!
Inozinha chapter 2 . 4/30/2011
Hi, look at your fic ta try to vary more than , is very Japanese, and the person loses 'm know the basics, and if you use the basics will also be a melhor.Não is just a guess Criticizes Un.

But still quite nice ta see.

Hime kisses until the next chapter
sasuinoeva4 chapter 4 . 12/26/2010
Don't even bother with that because i take that offensive too because im part japanese but whatever the person who wrote that is an ass but anyway thank you for the story and thank you for the translations too because i don't really speak much japanese because i live in america and i don't really visit my family in japan my parents don't really speak japanese around me but i really love the story please write more soon because i really love your stories and thanks again
myukamusic chapter 4 . 7/17/2010
Hey ! I don't mind u putting Sakura in that rate .. Love it ! Btw , make more ! Kay ? Ill wait * smile*
inozinha chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
ou sasuino ou gaaino o certo é a sakura feia fikar com - ninguem temari-shika ino-sasuke ou gaara hinata-naruto tenten-neji sua fic ta otima so pra saber voce e de portugal?
xxxAJxxx chapter 4 . 2/14/2010
I like this story... I've also read many of your fanfics and you are an amazing author.. cool for you... and you will be a greatest author if you will updated soon x)... bye!
Chuu112 chapter 2 . 1/11/2010
chiie112 chapter 4 . 8/24/2009
people r stupid sometimez so i dont blame them if they dont like Japanese anyways since i do like Japanese i say your Japanese is awesome so make an update soon kay? your story is awesome! _
NIVNIV chapter 4 . 7/15/2009
update fast plz its really getting good:D
Blacktears110 chapter 4 . 7/17/2008
Sorry to that Person for being so clueless and Dumb But I think Asains Are Smart, Seriously, Who Like Has The Awesomest technology? That Girl/Boy Must be livin in a rock or somethin' Asians Are Smart, well some but I never met one that was dumb. All of them we're cool And Smart!
Punk2Cute chapter 4 . 6/9/2008
i like it alot.

cant wait to read the next chapter!
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