Reviews for Evanescent Perfection
BoomPowMina chapter 3 . 2/12
THAT WAS SO HOT BUT CUTE AND THE ENDING HAD ME SNIFFLING OH GOD
Violyne chapter 3 . 9/12/2014
J-Pop Princess, you are definitely one of my favorite writers I have come across! Everyone of your pieces are so full of emotion, and your writing brings tears to my eyes, both happy and sad, in just about every story! Please keep writing!
cursedalleycat chapter 3 . 6/6/2014
Well written porn :D
KDTBpantherwulf chapter 3 . 3/24/2014
...daaaaamn...that was...that was something else. I don't even...*trails off in awe* that was amazing, easily best smutty SakuDei fic I've ever read. I salute you XD.
X Mika-Chan X chapter 3 . 12/16/2013
This story was amazing! The ending was bittersweet and I feel bad that they can't actually get together. It sort of makes me wish that he switched sides and joined Konoha. It's such a shame that they might not have accepted him anyway.
Owl.pendantry chapter 3 . 9/3/2013
have I ever mentioned in any previous reviews on stories of yours I have previously read just how much I love your stories? well, I do. and you really should know this. I guess I should be thanking cynchick for helping you out as well then (by the way, her writing is amazing too (just thought I'd get that in there too))

anyway, I've been trying to read this for some time now, but I always forgot about it. well, until now. I thought "read it, before you forget and you get pissed off again", which I did, and I am most grateful for it

the one thing I would recommend to others though, is to not read it all at once. YOU WILL HAVE LEMON OVERLOAD! if I had read it over a longer period of time (started it just before work the other day (bad idea) and at other bad times when I couldn't read much, so it took 3 days), I definitely would have appreciated it a lot more.

again, thank you to both of you for the LOVELY (lemon) story :D
V-ChanUzumakiLSSJ chapter 3 . 3/19/2013
This was amazingly done. You did extremely well. Great job. Very great job.
nemesisswan chapter 2 . 3/14/2013
I have read thousands lemons and if this one is not the the very best one I've ever read then it's damn close to my number one. WOW! You were amazing. You worked really hard on this chapter, didn't you? I'm talkative person but I'm in a lack of words now. Not only everything looked sooooooo perfect but also the way you describe things and words you use made me your fan on the spot. Can't remember last time I wanted to praise anyone so much. I'm so glad I wanted to read some M Rated fanfics with Deidara so I could have found you on the fanfiction. :)))
MoonxCandycane chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
sounds so real
MoonxCandycane chapter 2 . 3/7/2013
perfect
MoonxCandycane chapter 3 . 3/7/2013
epicc
DarogaDaae chapter 3 . 12/14/2012
So I just looked for this story after I don't remember how many years, and being out of the fandom for a long time, and it's still beautiful, and I still love it.
mililli chapter 3 . 10/17/2012
You're such a terrific writer! I loved every single word of this fic. Great work!
ilovetimbits chapter 3 . 10/15/2012
finally a good deidara sakura lemon, seriously i read other's and i think 'HIS MOUTHS! use it! use it!'

Very creative and has a good story plot.

I love how you added deidara's passion in 'fleeting art' incoperating it within the smut and how they are realistic and not OCC where sakura would run away with him rather she did what 'sakura' would do all in all very good :)
young kagome chapter 3 . 8/15/2012
I was half hoping she would really run away with him! But I knew she wouldn't. Wonderful story I enjoyed it, and I hope you continue to make great stories. :)
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