Reviews for In the Shadow of the Unborn
xxxLauraaxxx chapter 4 . 9/15/2010
hey i love this story, but how did u get the idea of the hecorri(i think i spelt it right cbf to go back and check)...

i love the idea of that.. lol but i justabout luv aanything to do with twilight... lol

with luv from ure favouritest person in the whole world(me)

laura

xxxlauraaxxx
debcripps chapter 4 . 11/17/2008
I really like your story. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Gryffindor'sSlytherinPrincess chapter 4 . 8/4/2008
you are HILARIOUS! and fyi, you're a celeb too! Ypu've read Breaking Dawn by now right? all i can say is...wow...

and of course:

YOU ARE JUST LIKE ALICE!

THAT MAKES US LIKE TWINS, AND WITH ALICE TRIPLETS!

lol.

This time you can have whatever letters you want, i just got a new shipment! And i have a special cream to make you blind if you want it to protectyou from future...Debacles.

Lots 'o Love and some fake snow for your cereal!

kISmeT!
mattybabe chapter 4 . 8/3/2008
Hey yeh i am British :D i LOVE americans hehe am going to america next week so i cant wait! but i have to wait to get breaking dawn i get it on monday! NOT FAIR lol but can't wait. loved this chapter it was brilliant the new character is great :D xx
Ratty Rowley chapter 4 . 8/3/2008
cool! so, the question is - who really is Eboni? dun dun dun! keep up the good work sweetie. ciao, becky (AKA ratty rowley)
xiomara209 chapter 4 . 8/2/2008
yea..your back..so you moved to hong kong..wow thats exciting..so whats the story with this girl..i dont like her..update soon..pretty please..
xDreamOn'94 chapter 4 . 8/2/2008
:)

really liking it :)

hmm ajmes is here..different

:O

someone putted the BD chapters on intenret O.o

must..resist..

you maybe could do later,tha bella comes in the room [edwards in bed] and in her very hsort innoncent pj''s ,than kisses him,tehe

and than he like wants to try a bit further

and she stops and is like,goodnight edward

x] such a tease :p

anyways,more?(aa)

and have nice day further ;)

only 6 daysz,than BDAY,and than BD will be delivered :)

xoxo

x3

D
littlecrickit chapter 3 . 7/22/2008
make james DIE!
Gryffindor'sSlytherinPrincess chapter 3 . 4/10/2008
LOL! Don't feel bad Dana it wasn't that bad!(Entice's dance however...)LOL! JK! We love you and your crazily random dances! But they cannot compare to my own scarily and crazily random dances! so HA! lol!

I loved the chapter...well sort of...it made me sad...and want to kill James even more than i wanted to in Twilight...damn you james! i am notlonger capitilizing your name for you do not deserve such an honor!

I can't wait for that next chapter, but if you get bored...you could always read some of MY stories and review...**waggles eyebrows**...you know you want to...lol

X's and O's and Q's and F's and W's!(cuz those are my favourite letters!)

Catty-Amanda-Bella-SEXYBOXERS!

and PSYou can say Kismet next time if you don't want to write out my full username, however i love feeling like a Celeb with my name up there, and the free publicity is to die for, lol. Heres so cookies for the awesomely[and sad...((ly?))] chapter! o[
Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 3 . 4/3/2008
YAY! it's been so long it so good to have an update! loved it and can't wait for more so update soon! _
eclipselover chapter 3 . 3/31/2008
wow that was some story! I like how she stood up to Rose
wingedspirit chapter 3 . 3/30/2008
oh phwie only 3 chapters and I was just getting into it anyway very original YAY! something differant. anyway already loveing it.
mattybabe chapter 3 . 3/30/2008
omg! brilliant story so far! :D i just want bella to get with edward haha! i wana see what happens between them haha! carry on and update soon :D
DanaFruit chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
you knwo what i shouldn't even review you bitch

and you should see my heels from monday's practice

I'll tell you about it during the game but I'm probably not going to play that well

lets jut say it involves blisters, cleates 5 sizes 2 small

and a long soccer practice

pretty much leaves me with no skin on my heels

and fuck they still hurt!

done complaining!

very good, but her story is almost too descriptive ya know?

like we didn't need to know he had poison apple red eyes

it was kind of a drag to read her story

(I'm being honest here, better than tellin you what you want to hear)

other than that its soundin pretty good

ask Kat 2 tell u what the code in my story is

it has to do with Panic at the Disco (they freakin got rid of the ! )
xiomara209 chapter 3 . 3/29/2008
great story..wow..rose is so mean..but i understand her so has problems..update soon..the suspence is killing me..
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