Reviews for Broken Dreams
Mystic-Myth chapter 1 . 10/24/2016
Wow nice twist
Murasaki Hina chapter 1 . 9/22/2015
Whoa. Talk about dark. Very nice though.
KiraK.chan chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
Omggg that's actually so evil Naruto literally cut sasuke's dream off like reason for fighting that's a great plot and ending! Short, straight to the point, but you still got all the mixed emotions including the lil heart squeezeeeeee
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
Looovvvveee it.
OneDayPineapple chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
ooohh sheeiittt XD
TheGrandJester chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Well... Shit.
loveinuyashatoshiro chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
it's great
me chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
well damn, that was cruel, harsh, and AMAZING! god, if only naruto did that in the actual show (: im sorry to say this, but sasuke deserves it :P
Anne1313 chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
omg naruto is such a bitch

but he IS clever

very clever
heir.of.rage chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
wow, that would completely work, too! if sasu wasnt such a complete asshole for the whole "killing his own brother" thing, i would (maybe) feel sorry for him! great job!
anemix chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
Good, dark story. Very well written.


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RakeeshJ4 chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
Hmm. Well-written and intriguing, but the story's short length works against you IMO. I can buy that Naruto might someday become so vindictive, so subtly cruel as's just that I don't buy it here, because while Naruto was hurt, he never channeled that hurt towards revenge. Certainly not the kind of cold-blooded lifetime revenge that he orchestrates here.

I can imagine a world in which Naruto plausibly does just takes some framework to build up to it is all. Still, quite enjoyable, and thanks for sharing:)
dessertgirl chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
An amazing sotry. I must admit, I have a rather unhealthy obsession with cold-hearted Narutos. You captured it perfectly, congrats on a job well done.
Suzette's Blue chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
I love that you thought up the one thing that would hurt Sasuke most ... but did you have to kill Tachi? why couldn't he have become Hokage or something outragious like that?
spiralgal chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Woah! Cool! It's really short and all(I mean, it IS a oneshot), but it gets right to the point and tells us about the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto. There is a whole lot contained within such a short piece. Which is the whole point of a short story, to convey a meaningful message and make people think without telling people a whole long story(sry, reviewing for finals, did short stories in English class).

Nice work. Ja ne.
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