I bet Sarah will want to go after Sevarius for this.

Really good chapter! Action, some humor, and all the characters we see! You did a good job of not really ending on a cliff-hanger, but leaving us wondering what happens next! I look forward to the next chapter!

Great instalment! I loved all the interaction between Fang, Broadway and Mrs Browne! I got the feeling from the show that she would only be with the Quarrymen because she feared for her family's safety, so once she got to actually meet one then she would slowly start to realise the truth of them! Poor Daniel; I don't envy what he's going to go through with his mom in revealing what his stepdad's really been up to and everything. Awesome chapter!

What a rollercoaster of a chapter! Especially starting with Elisa's POV before switching to the action-packed POV of Fang!.

That ending especially got me, as I wasn't sure what I was thinking would happen or not. It actually scared me, thinking of that kind of scenario, and I really look forward to what happens next!

Brilliant chap! I was surprised to see Lou and Chaz betray and attack Fang. I mean, I get that they hate gargs for what happened in the Labyrinth, but they know Fang isnt a garg and that he was the gargs' enemy as well, so why would they do that?

Great to see a new chap from you! It was worth the wait! I have mixed feelings about the clan putting in cameras at Daniel's home; on the one hand, I can understand that they need to keep an eye on Fang, but at the same time I see this as an evasion of privacy, and am pretty sure it's a criminal offense. Fang made the right call not to try going for custody rights; even if he had plenty of potions, with his track record and the fact that he'd been missing for who knows how long, I doubt any court would give him the time of day or night.

What the hell, how did the Quarrymen get in? Somehow I feel that things are about to get so much worse. I feel that Danny is about to be in grave danger. Something really bad will happen soon, and Fang will go full on 'Taken' mode to save Danny.

I liked this chapter! It was very good! And the ending was especially good, though I now have to wait a while to read what happens next! Keep up the good work, and I hope your writing goes well!

Such a good chapter! Really great to see Fang and Daniel hanging out together! I loved it! Not to mention adding your love of cozy mysteries into the story!

Though Fang's still Fang, and I can only imagine what the fallout will be when Daniel finds out the truth about certain things! But until then, I can't wait to read what happens next! Keep up the great work!

Love scenes of bonding.

Man, I'm surprised I've not clicked on this story until now. It's fantastic! I appreciate that so far it's not exactly been a high flying, world saving adventure more commonly found in Gargoyle's stories; you've kept in quite grounded and really let us enjoy the company of the characters.

Looking forward to more.

Nice chapter! It was good to see the different POVs, as well as showing the consequences of Halloween night!

That bitch will get what's coming to her for this, I know it.

Damn, poor Fang! What a way to end Halloween!

I liked the karaoke bit at the beginning; very entertaining and it was great seeing the two of them having some fun! Not as much of a fan of the more intimate stuff afterwards, but choosing who you did to attack and beat up Fang was unique and cool!