|Reviews for The Ghost and the Darkness|
| Avidreader212 chapter 13 . 2/28
This is really a dark ass story... It's really killing whatever mood I was in.
| hinatalover445 chapter 17 . 1/29
I love this story. I hope you haven't abandoned it.
| Anarchy-Bell101 chapter 17 . 1/10
This story is really good. You have written two very mentally unstable characters perfectly. Good work. I like the unique way that Sasuke and Naruto interact. Sasuke is jst as messed up as Naruto. Update soon!:) Thanks.
| Ermilus chapter 17 . 12/21/2013
Why. Did u stop
| paracuties chapter 17 . 10/26/2013
First thing I want to say: Your story is plain creepy. Definitely good, seeing as I read it all the way to the current end even though I know it is unfinished, and probably will be forever.
However, what I wanted to say is: This started out innocently enough, but all of a sudden you're delving into mental sicknesses and really, truly scary side-effects of it. ...Wow. To say I was surprised when I finally realized the extent of it-which is what you revealed this chapter-is like saying the Hokage merely dislikes doing paperwork.
This is amazingly written, but crazily scary, and deep. At times, I feel like it's unrealistic, how bad Naruto is; wouldn't he still have this inner sadness that urges him to desperately look for a friend? But add in mental illness, and wow. And then you clarify it with the lifetime of sleep deprivation, and then. Wow. That's really all I can say about your story. Wow.
Overall, amazing story. Really wish you would continue writing this story, but...it hasn't been updated in, what, two years? I think.
Nevertheless, keep writing!
| High Daemon chapter 4 . 10/21/2013
This story has intrigued me to a very certain extent. Naruto the boy that is scared of his shadow and Sasuke the boy the wants to protect him from himself but doesn't know how. A good read for sure.
| Flaming Kyuubi-Chan chapter 17 . 10/20/2013
Great story. Please finish the story.
| Sakura117 chapter 17 . 9/13/2013
This story is fantastic, I hope you will continue it someday
| Pein-DevaPath chapter 6 . 8/26/2013
i have to ask, what did you base Motoko's ghost off of?
because i'v been searching for ages to find out if there's actually some kind of spirit like that.
a spirit of a grieving mother who's eyes are void and black, who's mouth when open wails a cry of anguish.
first time i read that i had nightmares of it
| Noble1998 chapter 17 . 8/21/2013
i still don't get what the heck's up with the clone
| chocovic-chu chapter 17 . 8/10/2013
Maa, the story made Vic intriguing. Mostly Naru-tan hoodie-chara. And his relatiionship with Sasuke-sama. A mere roommate bonding? Mou, Vic just wishes they would acknowledge their bonding to friendship or brotherhood.
Ja, where's the next chappie?
| Datseku chapter 17 . 8/4/2013
Did you stop?plz tell me you didnt stop!
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/30/2013
impressed! i wasn't at first gonna continue reading this story but then somehow something got me hooked you really are an amazing writer!
| Addicted-to-the-Madness chapter 17 . 7/22/2013
Um...are you well? Or even alive? I really hope so because this is one of the best Naruto fictions that I've ever read. Literally. Well one that wasn't yaoi so in my defence that's a lot. I hope that Naruto will be deserting Konoha with Sasuke because they've been with each for six years and Sasuke is the only person that Naruto feels comfortable with so it'd be awesome to see Karin all bitchy but having accepted that she could come after Naruto in Sasuke's heart, Jugo following Sasuke's orders and protecting Naruto because he's cute that way (Phyco with many but sweet with some) and Snarky-Sharky just enjoying himself all the while saying that Naruto's weird.
Anyway. If you are in deed alive, which I'm hoping for dearly and is continuing this fiction then I'll be waiting for your update because this fiction is freaking Awesome! My new Favourite!
| Matthias Kohler chapter 17 . 7/6/2013
Man, is this story angsty. I love! The story is great! I would love to see another chapter.