LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE. Thank you, I've read so much crap today that reading something as good as this makes up for it all.

*bows down before you*

Rachel

Nice tribute to Stephenie Meyer there at the end. I love this, by the way! This is hilarious! Write more please!

Well back with another cracker I see. You've had me laughing again. Can't wait to see how this one is going to unfold. Ben Dover...classic haha! :o)

oh my goodness! i

Awesome story! Love it!

OMC, OMC, OMC! ::gasps for breath:: That was hilarious! No, not hilarious...no word to describe how funny that was! I love this story already! I know I'm going to enjoy this. Benjamin Dover...loved that! That was too funny. Update ASAP! Need more funny!

Yay! I'm so glad you've already started a new story! Its great just like the last! Update soon!

YAY - I love it! You are definitely one of my favorite authors. Off to read chapter 2!

Oh, anoher story! What a plesant surprise! The idea is really good... I will be waiting patienly for updates, as I have been for weeks ;)

“What, you don't want Dr. Dover knowing you let your kids shack up under your roof, dad?” Emmett is still funny!

oh my gosh

that was GREAT

seriously, i couldn't stop laughing

please update soon

O my goodness! This hilarious! It took me five minutes to get the doctor joke! In the end my brother had to explain the joke to me and i laughed for ten minutes it was hilarious! This is great you've always been a great author! Can't wait till the next chapter!

JW

I can see Carlisle being sarcastic...he's one of my favorite characters! Vampire therapy...Ha!

this is so awesome! update often! you rock!

oh cute

especially Dr Ben Dover

update soon

wish you would continue!