Reviews for Punishment
Enyo-of-Chaos chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Oh wow, I think reading that actually physically hurt. In a good way though. I mean I could almost feel the pain they were going through and that final part. It begs the question, as her daughter grows up, can Elphaba love the green child when she is incapable of loving her green self and apparently sees the child as a curse?
elphiefanatic chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
THANK YOU! Okay, well, I've read a lot of fanfics where Elphaba has a child and it isn't green, to make her happy, but I've always thought she should have a green child. This delighted me!

It was great!
This account is deleted 2 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
One word, it was: - yes, I am about to use this word - perfect.

Thank you for posting this, Faba. I loved it.

Miz Blond ;)
ME LOVEY JAZZY chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Wow, very good actually!
darkruki008 chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
OMG! this was so good! Poor Elphie and Yero TT...but they'll get over it, right? ._.

Great writting by the way :)
TryDefyingGravity chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
:O Faba, I'm so proud of you. Over THREE THOUSAND words is quite a feat.

That was wonderful. Just wonderful.

Alice-in-french chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
That was beautiful!

lotrelves chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
It's not stupid!

just me chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
I loved that! It was really well written and I was hooked from the first line (what can I say, it was my kind of story). Anyway, please tell me you are continuing this? Well, whether you do or not, you deserve a "job well done!" Kudos!
Sale chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
Wow, Faba, that was genius! Pure, unadulterated G-E-N-I-U-S. You've got the sense of urgency down, and I actually like the end!