Reviews for Untitled
Holly chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
Love it! I realize this is probably a little late, but please continue it!
RazzleDazzled chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
This was a great expansion on one of the best scenes in the series- really enjoyed it!

I offer only one piece of constructive criticism; your writing wavers between several tenses and it can be a little jarring to read one sentence in present tense and the next in past. If you can work on that aspect of your story-telling and really focus on making sure that everything is written in the same tense, you'll more than deserve the 'top-notch' title as an author! _

Thanks for a wonderful read- I miss this show!
Pagan-Angel13 chapter 1 . 4/6/2008
I liked it, how she found comfort in his mere presence and didn't want to be parted from him for any reason.

I liked how you left it but at the same time how it can be continued.

I hope you continue this fic as it started out really well and kept me interested.

I really hope you continue as I'd like to see where this goes especially after the last line of the fic.
GuardianOfTheLastStar chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
I like this. you should carry on
Quicksilver19 chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
Nice chapter... you should continue!
lagentillefan chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
For me,yes,TBC...I'm curious to see what you will write about us!

Love this pairing!