|Reviews for Crank's Games|
| Stephbee chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
This realy is good. i want to read more, eventualy. i was dirapointed to only see 2 stories for Kinetica, but this is good. And I like the list in the begining, its like a report, fits the story. thanks for posting.
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I like the story. I think you have vast writing history ahead of you. And don't listen to that little know-it-all saying your an amatuer. At least you've written something!
| AxL459 chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
First of all, I see you haven't updated in a while. Bad idea.
Second of all, what's with the list of racers at the start of the chapter? You could have just as easily done that while incorporating it into the story itself, not just make a list as soon as it starts. As far as I'm concerned, you seriously need to review the way you write.