Reviews for Almost a Squib
Cool Guest chapter 7 . 7/21
Beautiful! Such happy ending.

I was looking forward after chapter four for a twist were Harry unlocks all the magic he possessed deep inside when he gets worked up or emotional enough. But the message of being able to become successful make the most out of your life and live happily in spite of whatever handicaps you might have is so wholesome makes me want to cry.

Each and everything we do is a miracle, we might not have actual magic, but if you can see, hear, and move a little then you should appreciate what you can do, and try to make the most of it.
Cool Guest chapter 5 . 7/21
You might have felt this chapter wasn't as good but I liked it a lot.

It was less humor, more grim outcomes, more drama and feels. Harry was pretty dark in the way he dealt with many of the things here. That's not worse just different. I believe it came out so well from using the emotions you felt from book five. (I thought so with the way you wrote the prophecy reveal scene in particular and how harry tore through Dumbledore.)

It was an interesting chapter and that's what I love the most about fanfiction. It's unpredictable, it defies expectation. I applaud the change of tones for this chapter. Celebrate them. No need to force the story to feel a certain way if you find more natural to go another.

And please please continue writing Hufflepuff Harry year 5 and beyond.
Cool Guest chapter 2 . 7/20
This chapter was so funny. xD

This almost the same style as Harry the Hufflepuff, with maybe less clever schemes, more wholesome moments that make your heart go to Harry, and just as many funny hijinks.

I love it and I love you for writing it!
NaturalSagacity chapter 2 . 6/6
Very funny. I can't see why this Harry isn't in Slytherin.
X chapter 2 . 3/1
This feels like a 'Feel sorry for Harry' type fic. He's 2 dimensional in the last chapter. I don't have hope for this sadly. Sadly an honest review would get you blocked on A02 it sucks where society has gone you can't say anything more then 'Thank you' which that too will be seen as offensive someday sooner rather then later.
X chapter 1 . 3/1
As noted by Filch they all justify their own mean behavior which is what happens when a society tosses away moral right and wrong values. Then anything goes and it goes to hell real fast.

The whole world is following the fall of Ancient Rome which took about 100 years to complete. Look up the fall of Rome it's fascinating and we are doing the exact same BS. We really DON'T learn from history nor our mistakes.
claradewlover chapter 7 . 2/6
Great story. I love how having barley any magic didn't stop him and he used his head more.
IamKroGan1 chapter 1 . 1/16
You have Harry do different things but he somehow ends up in the exact same situations as canon. So weird.
IngenDoddman chapter 7 . 11/15/2022
Who's Harry's partner?
nilluminator chapter 4 . 9/17/2022
They don't have doors! I died, and I blame BajaB for aiding and abetting a homicide by inferring knock-knock jokes
Love2read23 chapter 7 . 9/14/2022
This has been such a great story!
I love Harry's character. I love how he's just doesn't agree with stupid choices. Thank you for this frank analysis.
I'm glad Harry didn't let other people get him down but also loved how he told Dumbledore what for when the man brought up the prefectship. Thank you for writing.
Love2read23 chapter 5 . 9/14/2022
Oh no! I was so hoping Harry would have something to catch Sirius like a giant sticky hand or a fake spider web to cover the veil so he couldn't fall in. Poor Harry.
Love2read23 chapter 3 . 9/13/2022
I love this fic. Harry's simple logic backed up by accounts of his experiences is brilliant as it doesn't show Harry as particularly brilliant just not reliant on magic to fix everything.
Theyellowking123 chapter 7 . 9/4/2022
tardisgater chapter 5 . 8/24/2022
The dungbombs are amazing as always, but damn you hit the emotional notes good. The Dumbledore office rant makes me wish it was canon, cause dear lord he says some things Dumbledore needed to hear. And the only-kinda-luney-Luna is awesome and I could totally see it as canon as well. 3 this story!
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