Reviews for What Was And What Will Be
A-LovesHP chapter 26 . 7/5/2012
Hello i just stayed up all night reading your story and i have to say its brilliant. i know its little to late to ask this but please continue the story it's the best George/Alicia Fanfic i've ever read! The way you have your story set up is so unique in your writing you make it sound like this really could have happened and i think it would be believable if George would of taken lethe after losing Fred it was like losing half of him. I can't believe you've gotten flames on this story it's got good spelling and grammar and the plot is an amazing idea. So i'd just like to say to anyone thats flamed this story your a bigger idiot than you can ever imagine. I'm sorry i wrote such a long review but i had to i absolutely love this story and it deserved such a long review )
Lucy chapter 26 . 12/21/2011
Come back, come back, come back. Bitte! I NEED to read the rest of this story. I usually read Draco/Hermione fics, but I needed something new and I found Past and Present. It is AMAZING. And your first language isn't even English! I read all 25 chapters in one night. You might have abandoned this story, but I want you to know it was amazing. And you are so talented!
firebolt42 chapter 14 . 8/3/2011
Another great chapter! I loved the bit about Angelina and Alicia talking about George in the classroom. :) xx
firebolt42 chapter 12 . 8/3/2011
This was such an amazing chapter! I really really like your portrayal of george and charlies relationship. Also, I thought that your description of Georges withdrawal was stellar! xx Elle
Leonavance chapter 26 . 6/18/2011
I love the story going back and forth in time. Sometimes it may be a little confusing but I find it much more interesting flashing back to the past rather than having them all in chronological order. Love your story, please keep it up :)
Vintage'Classic chapter 25 . 6/11/2011
Okay...I have to admit I LOVE this story. Love the way it switches from past to present and I constantly wanted to read more and more! Although I have to say I am a massive "Fratie" fan, I am also a big "Galicia" fan too and I think you wrote this story beautifully as it had a lot of very convincing emotional depth! Don't listen to flamers - keep writing! You're fantastic!

Love Lace

Alicia chapter 26 . 6/3/2009
oh please dont stop writing because one person who has terrible taste insults the story! its a really good and creative story!
harrypotterfan chapter 9 . 5/10/2009
this story is one of my all time favourite stories! but i just thought you should know the river of Hades is called Styx not Lethe, just thought you should know. but other than that this story is fantastic!
gazil331 chapter 26 . 5/2/2009
screw the flamers! this is the best fanfic i've ever read! and i like the going back and forth in time, it's my favourite part of the story and it's not confusing as long as you tittle the chapters as the dates(like you have..)so u BETTER write a new chapter(please)
Cymbeliness chapter 26 . 3/18/2009
I really enjoy this story- please keep writing!Don't listen to the douchebags... just keep doing your thing!
lachambre11 chapter 26 . 3/17/2009
Oh, I had no idea that this has happened. I'm handling an epic battle against my inbox, and just gotten around to this chapter, which turns, isn't one.

I love this story. I really, really do, and whenever there's an update, I'm happy. A flame can be upsetting, but this cannot put you off from writing. Some people just want to hurt others because they have sad, pathetic lives, or because they have been hurt and somehow feel entitled to spread anger, insecurity and hatred around the world.

But even though they can be hurtful, don't let them get you down, or get your story down. Report the flamer. Report the flame. Remember there are reviewers and readers that enjoy your story, and they're on a much bigger number than flamers.

Here's hoping you feel better, hon.


yasuhei chapter 26 . 3/15/2009
But I am not sure whether I will keep the story the way it is. I have always thought about reposting it all in the right order instead of going back and forth in time, which can be quite confusing for readers …

I hope you do not restructure it this way. The writing you have done so far is all structured around the original concept you had. If you reorder chapters it will not work nearly as well, not unless you rewrite everything from the very ground up.

As a reader, I did not find the current approach terribly confusing at all.

Thank you for the story so far, I have enjoyed it.
Phoenix Feather Quills chapter 26 . 3/12/2009
I like the going back and forth in time! I think that this is very well written and I've been upset that you haven't updated in a very long time. Don't be discouraged by flamers; half of the time they can't even write well themselves. Please don't stop writing this just because some people have told you that it wasn't good enough for them. This is a good piece of writing and I can't wait to see more!
book babe1990 chapter 26 . 3/11/2009
I just want to say that i love this story, i really do.

The way its written i admit might be confusing, just because of the break between chapters (not trying to say anything about that btw i underdstand other commitments and stuff come first) But i really like the story like that, i think it adds something different, and all people have to do is skip back to check whats been happening.

So i just wanted to say that i really think the layout of this story works, going backwards and forwards in time, and i love it like that, so if i were you i wouldnt change it, as im not it is of course up to you. but that is just my opinion


yin vs. yang chapter 25 . 1/22/2009
i love this story

george is so cute

and u've done a good job with the timeline

can't wait for the next chapter
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