Reviews for The Dating Game
Lady-May-May chapter 5 . 10/24/2009
hee hee hee, this has had me laughing the whole way through! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Mai Sode no Shirayuki chapter 5 . 10/5/2009
wow this story leaves me speechless! But i guess nothing less should be expected from two awesome authors such as yourselves! I was literally lmao for all 5 chaps! And I must say...Itachi was...wow! Your descriptions had me fanning myself! lol

So if I may ask, are you guys planning to finish this story or did the inspiration kind of die out?

I hope it does get completed someday though! :)
don't feed the models chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
witty and entertaining. :)

you guys are a godly team.
kaI-Chan.x chapter 4 . 9/10/2009
omfg. haha. x]!

Loved it. Please update.
delicate.desires chapter 5 . 8/30/2009
Great story so far! It's really interesting. I can't wait for more- I hope you update soon!
MissPinoyz chapter 5 . 8/16/2009
Please update!
lovegaara4ever chapter 5 . 8/10/2009
Ohmygoodness UPDATE!

LOL so funny ;D

I 3 the code names!
lovegaara4ever chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Hehe kakashi would do some assignment like tht! ;D

Really like the story so far!
Takakuma chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
i loved this story, and i think you should continue it! thanx, though i hope sasuke will understand her actions!
Xx AmuTadase xX chapter 5 . 7/28/2009
so...sasuke was... cough...grabing her...hum...butt?

yea...kinda weird...

continuing my story..._

i dont own naruto

sorry if you narukarin

or just karin

last time sakura came up with a game, who ever kills karin frist wins free ramen for a year, you are video taping every thing, hinata kind of in a way confest to naruto and he heard it, then she passed out. shika got up from his nape and wanted to kill karin too of surprizing ant' it?

yea i know, continue my stupid, has no point to it, story _

Me: your really going to move

Sasuke: and help?

Shikamaru: yea...this is only one time you get to kill a fat cow ...so yea..and well ramen is a lot to pay and i dont feel like paying..*yawn*

Sakura:...lazyass...

Shikamaru:that the name and dont wear it out.

Sasuke:and this is why you dont have a girlfriend.

Shikamaru:and you do?

Sasuke:...hell yea!

Shikamaru:and who would want to date a human-ice burg?

Sasuke:watch your mouth nara...

Shikamaru:i will when i see proof that you have a girlfriend.

Sasuke:you want proof?

Shikamaru:yep

Sasuke:i'll show you proof pineappele head!

*greabs sakuras head, so close their noses are touching*

Sakura: WAIT SASUKE WHAT ARE YOU-

Sasuke: *smashes her lips on his*

Sakura: *kisses back*

Me: *wispers to shika* nice job the plan worked!

Shikamaru: plan A: get sasuke and sakura together, doen!*wisper*

Me: *hand 5 shika*

Naruto:*trys to wisper but is to loud*WAIT _(my name) you made a plan to get them together? why didnt i get to know?

_ i thought i was your friend?

Me: YOU DUMBASS! I DIDNT TELL YOU CUZ YOU'D SAY IT OUT LOUD LIKE YOU JUST DID! NOW ME AND SHIKA ARE GOING TO DIE!and yes your my friend. MY DUBASS FRIEND!

Naruto: omigawd..im sorry_-chan...i didnt know...but it worked

Shikamaru: yea but now sasuke is going to hurt us..asshole..

You:*roling on the floor laughing*'and i got this on tap'(inside head)

Sasuke: YOU DID WHAT?

Me: s-s-sasuke just wait..remeber were f-f-friends..b-b-best friends! _"

Shikamaru:i didnt have a part in any of this, she payed me.*lieing*

Me: SHIKA YOU FUCKING LIER, IF I GO DOWN YOU GO TO!

Shikamaru:...why me?

Me:CUZ YOUR MY FRIEND, NOW SUFFER WITH ME!

Shickamaru:..."...

Me: SHIKAMARU- wait...*wispers to shikamaru* i have an idea

Shikamaru:what?

Me:you use shadow poishion(sp?) and i'll knock him out

Shikamaru:then what?

Me:then tie him to a pole...and when he gets up*evil grin*

Shikamaru:then what?

Me:sakura can do what ever she wants to him.

Shikamaru:*sigh* okay

You: HAHAHHAAHAHAHA! XD YOU PEOPLES ARE STUPID!

Me:you got anything beter?

You: mabye _

Me:well say it

You:nope -

Me: what the fuck is your problem?

You: no problem, just want to see you make a fool of your

self..and mabye get hurt too _

Me:your evil

You: i know and i love it _

Shikamaru:...ass...

You: you can say that!

( im not doing this to be mean, just for fun, you know, a joke, i think its funny, right?)

You: *turns on video*

Sasuke: what the fuck are you talking-

Shikamaru: SHADOW POSISION!

Sasuke: DAMN IT NARA, LET ME GO! IM GOING TO-

Me:*hites him in the neck*

Sasuke:...kill...you...

Me: ah thats beter..and he calls naruto anoying? phff yea right, sasuke take a look at your self.

Shikamaru: just hurry and tie him up will you troblesome woman?

Me: sorry,im just happy i knocked out an Uchiha_

Itachi: yea, dont be to happy girl or you'll be sad in the next 5 min.

Me: like im scared of you

Itachi: what did you just say?

Me: i said im not scared of you

Itachi: WHY YOU LITTLE-

You:*knocks out itachi*

Naruto: you just knocked out itachi!

You: and? he was getting on my nevers...

Me: thx

You: no problem, now hurry sasuke might wake up soon.

Me: oh yea right, shikamaru take sasuke into that room and tie him up

Shikamaru:Troblemsome

Me: OH SAKURA!

Sakura: yea _-chan?

Me: i have surprize for you

Sakura: really? what is it?

Me: your new boyfriend tieed up to a pole..right now hes knocked out...*EVIL GRIN* and hes all yours.

Sakura:*grabs my shirt* TELL ME WHERE HE IS NOW!

Shikamaru: over here crazy

Sakura: MINE!*runs into room and lock the door*

Ino:why does she get him?

You: cuz shes not a pig like you are...oh and your a dumbass..

Me: XD

Shikamaru: Ino..you just got owned

Ino: SHUT UP PINEAPPLE HEAD.

Shikamru: sorry all ready heard that one

Choji: *eats chips* HAHA(munch) INO YOU JUST GOT(munch) TOLD BY SHIKAMARU!

You&Me: WHEN THE FUCK DID CHOJI GET IN HERE?

Choji: i've been here -HEY INO GIVE BACK MY CHIPS!

Ino:fuck off you ass, there mine now *puts tung out and eats chips*

Choji: oh ino, did you for get these chips have carbs. but i gess it wont mater bucuz your all ready fat-

Ino:*Troughs chips at choji and runs to the gym screaming* YOU ASS HOLE! NOW SASUKE WILL NEVER LIKE ME !

Neji: he never has and never will..

Tenten:*giggles* thats a true blondie right there

Me: where the fuck are you people coming from?

Neji: well were in 'naruto' so we have to be here to.

Me: all right smartass.

(i like neji, im not trying to be mean to him, it just fit them moment)

Garra: im bord..are there cookies here_-chan(my name)

Me: Garra? when did you get here?

Garra: when you started writing about me, you know 2 scentens up.

You: Ha! hes right! lol

Me: whatever _(your name), anyway Garra i do have some cookies, you want one?

Garra: *cute eyes* OH PLZ PRETTY PLZ!

Me: yes Garra-

Temari: what typ of cookie is it _?

Me: oh hey temari, oh its a cocochip

Temari: okay that all right for him.

You: whats wrong if he eat a diffrent cookie?

Temari: you dont want to know

Hinata: we want to know!

Me: when did you get up?

Hinata: sh...i just got up 1 hour ago...dont say my name or naruto will see me.

Me: um okay

Temari: anyway he goes on a CRAZY sugar rush! its scary!

Naruto: HAHAHAHAHA GARRA YOUR CRAZY LIKE ME TOO!

Garra*munchcookie* yes i (munch) am (smile)

Narutp: hey _-chan?

Me: yea?

Naruto: is some one hiding behinde you?

Me: um

Hinata: DAMNIT!

Naruto: HINATA-CHAN!

Hinata: n-n-n-naruto-k-k-k-un

Naruto: i want to ask you some thing

Hinata: y-y-yes?

Naruto: do you want to be my girlfriend?

Hinata: YEA!*passes out*

Naruto: HINATA-CHAN *runs to her*

Me: well that was...

Shikamaru: boring *yawn*

Me: no! happy! *hite shikas arm*

Shikamru:OW! damn troblesome woman

Me: yea but im you best troblesome friend/woman

Shikamaru: yes*sigh* yes you are

Me: *SMILE* _

Garra:*see karin hiding behinde tree and puts sand on her and kills her* lookie temari, lookie at what i did! are you happy?

Temari: what did you - AH

Me: damn woman what is it?

Temari: GARRA KILLED KARIN! YES!

Me: WOWOWO

Naruto: DAMNIT! I WANTED FREE RAMEN!

Garra:...huh? free ramen?

Me: you killed karin, now you get a free year of ramen!

Garra: YEA!

You: well at lest every ones happy

Me: yep

Shikamaru:i'll be happy if a take a nap.

Me: okay shika you can...only if you buy me a new dress!

Shikamaru: wtf? just for a nap?

Me: yes

Shikamaru: no

Me: PLZ PLZ PLZ! BECUZ YOU LOVE ME? PLZ-

Shikamaru: fine-

Me: OR IM GOING TO BREAK YOU LEGS- oh wait you said fine. YEAH _ THXS SHIKA-KUN

Shikamaru: yea yea im going to take my nape that i had to PAY for...crazy woman

You: and you say im evil

Me: ill make him buy you one to

You: HEY BEST FRIEND _"

Me: yeah thats what i thought

Naruto: hey! your using shikamaru!

Me: naruto, shika is my one and only best friend, i would never use him, plus, do you know how many times i've bought him ramen? the money he owes me, PHFF! he sould buy me a house, no manshion! but becuz i love 'em like a brother,i wont make him do that...he'll just pay me back slowly.

Naruto: lazyass..thats wrong...the boy should pay not the girl...i may be stupid but not THAT stupid.

Me: *sigh* naruto your a sweetie and your going to make hinata happy

Naruto: REALLY? YOU THINK? HEARING THAT FROM YOU IS GREAT!

Me: yes really naruto...but if you hurt hinata-chan i will kill you with my bare hands

Naruto: NO I WONT HURT HER,ILL MAKE HER THE HAPPIEST GIRL ON EARTH! (sweet drop)

Me: good boy

You: i have weird reviews...(dsweat drops)

Well thats my weird,stupid,point less, story.

if you like it,well,i dont know show it to your friends...add it to your profe...i dont have one...so yea...anyway...

did you think is was funny?

stupid?

Im sorry i was really bord and wanted to write some thing

DISLIKE: I DO NOT OWN NARUTO! but thank heavens who does! -

OH your storie is the best keep going.

i love all your storys

thx for writing them
Xx AmuTadase xX chapter 4 . 7/27/2009
this is a great story...and if any one cant see that the soap opera is just like sasuke sakura and itachi then your a dumbass ... but i dont under stand...is itachi useing sakura for lust? i know sakura is just with him so she wont feel empty (i gess thats a way you can put it) but sasuke is a stupid jackass! i want to beat the living shit out of him! OPEN YOUR EYES ASSHOLE! and EW karin and naruto! thats just plane WRONG! never on earth will that happen...naruto and hinata forever...but sasusaku is WAY beter but still you picked a REALLY bad cupple with karin and naruto _ ithink im going to get sick...*pukes*

This is not to be mean..just feel like writing it...i dont own if you like karin or karinaru.

Naruto: WHAT THE HELLS YOUR PROBLEM?

You: what?

Naruto: WHY THE FUCK AM I WITH KARIN?

Karin: whats wrong with me?

Sasuke: your a god damn whore...

Naruto: YEA! BITCH! wait...sasuke said a sentence! Wow!

Sauke:...shut. the. fuck. up. ...

Naruto:...jerk...

Me: ANYWAY!

Sakura: *wispers to me and you* lets play a fun game.

You: what game?

Sakura: who ever kills karin first gets a free ramen for a year! _

Naruto: SWEET! killing karin and geting ramen for a year! best game ever!

Me&Sasuke: dont care 'bout ramen, just killing karin -

Karin:do i get a say in this-

You: *hits karin in the arm* SHUT UP! GAWD YOUR ANOYING!

Every one but karin: DIE BITCH!

Karin: AH!

You: GAWD she needs to die...

Me: dont you want to help?

You: i am

Sasuke: how?

You: geting all this on video _ you'll thank me later.

Sasuke&me: kool

Hinata: D-does t-this mean i-i-f karin dies i-i-i get n-n-naruto to m-my self?

You: yep _

Naruto: H-Hinata?

Hinata: Shit! *passes out*

Naruto&you: Hinata!

Sasuke: shes cussed?

Me: yep XD

Sakura: wow hinata...YOU GO GIRL!

Shikamaru: yawn..what i miss?

Me: OH! shika were killing karin and who ever kills her frist gets free ramen for a year!

Sasuke: Damn we forgot,lets go! shes getting away!

Me: Damnit,BITCH GET BACK HERE!

Shikamaru: killing karin huh?... all right im in.

Well that was fun...if i feel like it i'll continue it mabye... i dont want you to be mad at me for writing this.

sweatdroops* hehe
KaT stah chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
hahaha... well that was unexpected! Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!
KaT stah chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Lol! This is great! It's funny and witty and SasuSaku!
Shubhs chapter 5 . 6/7/2009
LOVE the story!Its AWESOME!And did I forget to say STUPENDOUSLY FABULOUSLY FUNNILY AWESOMELY AWESOME LIKE US GIRLS!HECK YEAH!LOLZ!XP XD XP XD XP XD
The Disappeared chapter 5 . 5/16/2009
Aw! It makes me happy! Teehee! Anyways, keep writing!
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