Reviews for A Helping Hand
Windform chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
I've had TV's in real life that turned themselves on and off before... Silly kids.
eff-eff-fanatic chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
WHOOOOO! that was hot! and just HOW old is Cloud and Leon? 13 and 14 is pretty young I guess :P naughty boys tut tut tut! Did you ever think of writing a sequel? *waggles eyebrows suggestively* like...when they're older? xD anyways thanks for sharing! :)
AkumaStrife chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
"Take off your fucking pants, Cloud"

XD best line EVER! (i can see how Leon would become seme in this relationship P)
Kive chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
LOL at the magic TV ... I didn't noticed until I read the AN xD

Aww that was mhmm I don't know if I can sweet, I feel oh-so-perverted already, but it was kinda cute, the fact they're all innocent about it and all.

good job it made me giggle and... yeah I guess I blushed a little ._. (ha! "I guess",I can't see myself right now but I bet I'm totally red xD)
TalesFromPerdition chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
I've read this story before, and I can't believe I didn't comment on it the first time.

I love this story. Even if it makes me feel like a perverted old man for reading it (which in itself is funny, because I'm a nineteen year old girl, haha), because they're so young. But I always wondered if guys everywhere helped each other out.

Wonderful. Faving. Hehe.
Anna chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
I wasn't planning on reviewing (no offense, I just don't review often (plus, Im a little embarrassed that I read smut, and more embarrassed that it's not a rare event)). The ending, however, got me. Not even the amazing story, but you authors note. The magic TV, lol! I did notice, but I love that! If you didn't notice the magic TV then, what magic TV! You're an excellent author, and very funny.
Bourbon Waltz chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
I lol'd

Socks of a Salesman, the Lust of a Salesman

you got a fetish? ;D

and lmao, you're just a great writer. xD
xxgigglesxx chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
who cares about the magic tv?

that was HOT.

besides, maybe one of them bumped the remote or something.

but who cares, really?

i sure don't.

HOT.

:D
dragunzahurr chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
i feel like a pedo

but

it

was so hot~t

;-;
Koakuma Tsuri chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
I don't know why, but both myself and Omega found this SO funny... It was really nicely written and the porn was just so... well... sounded like something that would be released normally.

Nicely done XD
Lalaria Shamir chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
All hail the magic porno TV. lol. I liked it! :)

~~lala
The Mrs.Black chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
OMG DO PPL START TO F* AT the age of 13/14! (O0O)
Rhys-the-Redeemed chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
that...was...awesome. you are great at this. i'm gonna add you to my favorite author b/c of this story. ttyl.
iluvstrawberries chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
yummy

i like the whole innocence to it

really nice :]
RaNdoM Aoi Tsuki chapter 1 . 12/22/2007
...wow...
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