Reviews for Shinji and Warhammer40k
Malgrath chapter 1 . 3/22/2019
IRIDIUMHERO chapter 10 . 3/22/2019
And now, Shinji... You know the Emperor's mind. In a way, you are now Him. The mechanical and emotionless decisions He made. The choices He had to make. The lives He played with.
IRIDIUMHERO chapter 2 . 3/21/2019
While, ignoring the problems of Mecha and the Squ Cube law... Why not build a minicannon? Build a massive revolver type cannon firing 105mm shells. At the very least, it'd slow it. Or a 200mm Gustav? Or batteries of 180mm cannons. Also, LRPs, I'm going to peg AP at around 780-900mm of RHA penetration due to the 140mm L55. Now, assuming we're fighting a RHA type armor, the net penetration of the cannon if we fire HEAT should be around 700-790mm, estimated from a Hellfire ATGM's 180mm warhead and 850mm AP. Of course, BtA effect would be horrendous. The sheer damage from several dozen shells striking and such would quickly turn the target to dead by charring flesh and ripping into internals. But I digress.
Malgrath chapter 1 . 3/18/2019
Dear God above...what have you created. I don't understand Evangelion at all and I barely understand 40k beyond anything related to Kreig, because no matter how robotic they maybe, they are still easier to understand than Evangelion. And now you are going to fuck my mind in ways Tzeentch and Slaanesh can't understand if/when I get around to reading this.
Star Iron chapter 9 . 3/17/2019
Wow. You are amazingly skilled in your portrayal of Shinji's gifts. Even reading about what is said second hand has a certain spiritual quality. I know that some may consider Shinji's way of getting people on his side unrealistic but there are some people who possess a certain unquantifiable gift to move and speak to someone in a way that words just can't explain. You have managed to capture and describe Shinji's ability to do so amazingly well. Kudos.
Papa Cipher chapter 23 . 3/9/2019
Sir, finding your story made me realize that the Emperor truly does want humanity to be happy.

I have been quiet up to now, but I will start reviewing regularly from chapter to chapter.
Nihatclodra chapter 28 . 3/6/2019
Okay, what the hell? You seem to constantly imply that Shinji has very little psychic power, then he has a lot of raw power but little control, then you imply that he has lots of control but little power, then back to his having lots of power but too scared of himself to admit it, then he has little power AND little control; until finally he has immense power (I assume) from absorbing(?) a daemon's power... but he needs Hasya to act as a battery-pack for that power?

either you are VERY inconsistent with this, or you are really bad at portraying what you are trying to portray...

And I can understand your not wanting Shinji to become super powerful and/or a Gary stu; but all of these round-about methods of power he keeps accumulating yet cannot access any of the significant ones unless under specific circumstances? They're just pissing me off. I really REALLY hope you have him suck it up and just accept the damn power eventually, 'cause this is getting absolutely fucking ridiculous... if he's so gung-ho about protecting humanity, why is he so insistent on using the less efficient and convoluted methods; when simply becoming a being for humanity to rally behind (something he has honestly been working towards, accidentally or not, this entire damn time) could solve SO MANY FUCKING PROBLEMS, is ridiculous.

Is it really too much to ask for a teenaged protagonist NOT make things more complicated than they need to be simply due to sheer angst? Because that is honestly all his obsessive aversion to becoming "someone important" is...

Sorry about the wall of ranting text that turned into, but this sort of shit always annoys the fuck out of me in any story...
Nihatclodra chapter 26 . 3/6/2019
I really REALLY hope Shinji stops with that retarded "but I couldn't possibly be powerful!" bullshit very soon...
Nihatclodra chapter 23 . 3/5/2019
while it is pretty obvious that you're setting up Shinji to become the god-emperor; I'm beginning to get the feeling that Eva units 0, 1, 2, and 3 are gonna end up as the 4 chaos gods... "principio eternus" becoming khorne, etc.
Nihatclodra chapter 21 . 3/4/2019
I get the feeling that Shinji controlled/possessed Hyuga to give that god's lore and mob speeches...

And ovulation suppressants? So Rei ISN'T sterile?
sonic chapter 52 . 3/1/2019
I liked the chapter.
sevae chapter 52 . 3/2/2019
I can't count how many sharks this has jumped
tymofey chapter 52 . 3/2/2019
Ah, how I missed this. I applaud your resolve to finish this after such a long hiatus.
Goerman chapter 52 . 3/1/2019
HOT DAMN. More? Please and thank you.
Nagisa Tr chapter 52 . 3/1/2019
You spent 11 years of your life writing this masterpiece you madlad. My respect is utterly infinite to you my god sir. You are one of the few writers that keep this site alive. Continue doing what you like.
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