Reviews for Deconstruction
Musa Rox chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
aw... nice Was the girl Tohru? Or just a random-chan?

And yeah, OOC, what with Akito being so nice and cool. And I can sorta see it happening, but it's hard, not to mention a bit weird. Nikki sounds cool, but not right for Akito (Duh, MR, it's an Akito and Tohru fic!). And wait... does everyone KNOW Akito's a girl? Or just Nikki and her friends?

It's pretty exciting, though a tad OOC, and has a cool start. Update quick please!

PS. oh. that's when! Thanks (in regard to Artificial Gods)
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