Reviews for Savior of the Blind and Broken
Bluish chapter 1 . 7/11
Long review.
The summary and the first chapter is different from each other. I like the backdrop of her having to forced to marry. I am getting the feeling this is going to be very interesting.

There are some parts that feels like it have too many unecceary describing words. Like when she are about to take a bath. She mentions twice that likes lavendel, when its already established. Its important to move on and not get caught up in describing too much, else the reader might lose attention.

Completly trusting someone you barely knows, immediately, sounds dangerous. I feel like there should be a gradual building up trust between the two characters. Give them time, to get to know eachother. Let her be careful and skeptical at first to this man she cannot see. She is a shinobi, so shouldnt it be logical that she will be hestiant to trust him? In the Shinobi universe, you never know who's your enemy. But this is the first chapter, so I will see what happens.

I do like that you write how shy, insecure, and fragile Hinata is feeling. And how hard she is trying yet falters in staying strong. And even she, has things she does not tolerate.

Try to use shorter sentrences, and more break commas " , " . It will make it easier, to read the long sentrences.

Itachi felt abit too sadistic and charming to be Itachi. That is more like Kabuto to be. Itachi is stoic, and doesnt try to be dramatic or play with his enemies.
MatureFetus chapter 1 . 2/4
Five years after discovering this fanfiction and it is still one of my favorites.
Zhura chapter 22 . 9/6/2014
I looooove this fic! so amazing!
I love kisame here, And I also think he is handsome
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
Her so-called "friends" (like Ino and Tenten) really suck: blaming this on her, when she's the one who suffers/will suffer the most from this mess!

I feel like Tsunade made a grave error by sending her on this mission, because, as much as I love Hina, she's not strong enough to take on an Akatsuki by herself. Especially not, since she hasn't been looking after herself, something a doctor like Tsunade would have recognised.
Kay chapter 6 . 11/22/2013
jeez it's been years since I read this one I love kisahina soo much almost can't believe that it only has about 800 views but I also bet not many people are into the pairing like I am
chabeliss16 chapter 22 . 9/29/2013
OmG I really love this story and this pairing soo much. I enjoyed reading your fanfic especially this chapter and the others. I cant wait to read the sequel 333
Guest chapter 16 . 7/12/2013
that was not funny
Unidentified chapter 2 . 6/20/2013
I saw a few typos, mostly in the authors note, but overall pretty good, if you say that in this AU Itachi is more of a/acts his role as more of a (Censored), the Sasuke Retrieval Arc was not as extensive, and the Akatsuki never shifted their plans in to high gear when Naruto got back from training.
haenlic chapter 21 . 4/29/2013
nice story! thanks for writing this!
Yu Nguyen chapter 20 . 4/2/2013
It was soooooo mean in the first though, but still I'm REALLY RELIEVED in the end lol xD. Don't scared me like that again author! xD
lumberry-hawke chapter 2 . 3/15/2013
I loved this chapter! I've never been much into this pairing, but I'm starting to be because you write it so well.
Guest chapter 22 . 2/17/2013
Amazing fic, I can only follow it and hope for a new chapter soon...! v
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 22 . 12/11/2012
Oh...my...goodness! This was an insanely epic fanfic! :D I want to read the sequel sooo bad! I normally wouldn't think to put these two together, as you said, a crack pairing, but it worked out so well _ Plus I love your writing style. The only downside to this fic is that it ended...saddness :( Anywho, Can't wait to read more of your stuff! :D
shadowsspell4792 chapter 20 . 11/4/2012
Every time I re-read the beginning of this chapter, I cry. *cries forever*
Cascade00 chapter 21 . 8/10/2012
You know when I first saw that this was Kisame and Hinata I was like WHAT! I've never read a fanfiction with them being paired! I was so surprise and shocked! At first I wasn't going to read it, cause it seemed kinda arkward but then I thought maybe it'll be interesting? You know try something new. And damn I am so happy it was yours! I just made a 360 and now I just love this pair! I don't know how you did it but you did it!
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