|Reviews for Bad Secrets|
| sfbxfcb chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
| RosesOfInnocence chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
oh yeah i was loving this.
| Kat Lee formerly Pirate Turner chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
Excellent writing! Enjoyed the story! Glad to see that we are not the only ones who saw the strong emotions between the two boys! Did you happen to notice that they changed clothes between the two scenes in the second movie, sometime during the ball game and the bleachers? We don't think Disney noticed, or they would have refilmed that one!
Only one constructive bit of critcism: Try not running your paragraphs together quite so much. It causes the fic to look a little bunched. Generally speaking, when we write, we start a new paragraph each time the speaker changes. Other than that, and the fact that the storyline was a bit simple (but very, very sweet and well fitting for the lads), we both loved your story! :-)
| OutcastOnTheCountOfInsanity chapter 1 . 11/12/2007