Reviews for Elfin Lied: Promised
chippermovie chapter 4 . 7/8/2012
I love the story. My only concern is that the story only covers their childhood. I would like to see more elements from their adulthood in the story (characters, places, etc...). So keep writing with the same quality you've shown and this story will dominate all others. Bwahahahaha!
Grimjowx chapter 4 . 6/30/2012
Amazing! You really capture the essence of Elfen Lied quite well. Nothing is ever good for those two Q.Q. hope things get better and even if it isn't, they are always together!
iShiney chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Heartbreaking fanfic. Love it :P
ShadowsofSerenity chapter 4 . 2/28/2012
I love this fanfic, thanks so much for writing it! The anime Elfen Lied is by far the most touching I've watched, so I'm glad to see such a beautiful, although gory, anime written fanfics about. The gore just adds to the point and gives it more feeling in my opinion. Either way, please continue the fic and upload soon! You're a great writer and I can't wait to read more!
Woot chapter 4 . 4/21/2011
I Reallllllllly hope u finish this story. One of the best I've ever read!
Guest chapter 4 . 3/27/2011
Even for a 4 chap 78k words story(for now) i'm sure you wrote the impossible...

No... just no, i refuse to believe anything else...

-Vinny
Emh chapter 2 . 3/27/2011
'Funny that that night it was an animal that showed more concern then her own species.'

She's not an human right?

Or are you telling it from her pov, that she doesn't know that at the moment yet?

Anyways Gj!
Wow chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
I've almost shed a tear from readin this, and listening to Lilium at the same time...

And it was only the Prologue...

Words can't explain how beautifully described this is...

*Sheds a tear*

-Vinny
Wyrken chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
What? No more? !
calidude146 chapter 2 . 5/14/2010
... This is like the 15th time i've read your story from start to end. i'm REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEALLY anxious to find out what happens next. i've actually thought of several scenarios that could happen after the end of chapter 4, but... they're probably not as good as the one you'll write about (hopefully you will). in any case, i only have one more review i can write after this, so (i've said this before, and i'll say it again) PLEASE u-p-d-a-t-e ASAP so i can make more reviews!
tehwes chapter 4 . 10/6/2009
Loving this story! At first I wasn't too sure about it but it definitely grew on me. It has the right amount of angst for Elfen Lied.

I've noticed a fair few typos and some sentences don't make sense. Maybe you should split up the chapters more? Would make it easier to proof read. The chapters do have a satisfying length, though.

Very much looking forward to the next update.
calidude146 chapter 3 . 7/28/2009
Hey again, it's me. I've been cutting myself every day since the day i finished reading the fourth chapter out of anxiety and impatience for your upload of chapter 5. i've become an outcast as a result with both my friends and family and all because you haven't updated for almost a year...

hahahaha! jk I'm not that crazy. i don't want you to be rushed, but at the same time i'm really eager to know wat happens next... SO PLEASE UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!
Skelo chapter 4 . 6/21/2009
Yes this is the story i am looking for! Plz make it that lucy gets a little dirty with her hands and kohta. I'v w8d for a story where he isn't bothered with lucy killing. plz don't make this angsty it kills the fic for me. upd8 soon!
RoyalWithCheese chapter 4 . 6/14/2009
This story is one of the best i have read on this site your writing is just amazing and i hope to see more so please update soon and don't abandon this story :)

P.S. sometimes i think the real show should have gone like this... good work
OnyxSwarm chapter 4 . 6/2/2009
I really like this story. The length of the chapters were a bit daunting at first, but the story quickly drew me in and before I knew it, I had read all four chapters.

Hope you update soon.
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