| Reviews for Air and Stone |
|---|
   Zovid chapter 20 . 12/3/2007 lol, good one. I ALMOST didn't catch that, but I'd figure there was a twist. I liked the part where Toph was mocking him. But I can see them being so innocent with a honey jar in their hands. and plus it does portray to sex. I mean honey jar honey pot girl's ... innocence ... |
| Demetria912 chapter 20 . 12/3/2007 Classic. Just pure classic. Keep it up. |
| Sof.Tmi.Nts chapter 19 . 12/3/2007 - Chapter 19 Ohh, I like this 'Fighting' story. Very Toph-ish thing for her to do. Maybe have just one more of them? Enjoying the series so far, it's nice to have frequent updates. |
| Zovid chapter 19 . 12/2/2007 This is really good. I loved all the stories so far and I can't wait to read more. My top three favorite ones would have to be: Worth the Wait (way to capture Toph's character perfectly) Sick Kiss, (I laughed so hard tears came out) and what Teenagers Do I (because the whole Toph grabbing Aang by the belt thing is pretty...interesting.) Can't wait till you update |
| Chakram Soldier chapter 18 . 12/2/2007 this is good so far. keep it going. |
| XxXJTDXxX chapter 19 . 12/2/2007 I like that one alot. The fighting stories were awesome! |
| Josephus Prime chapter 19 . 12/2/2007 o niice. please tell me theres a fighting Part I comign soon! |
| Butterfree chapter 2 . 12/1/2007 You deifnetly thought out of a good structure and plot for your story, it definetly fits together into a one-shoot I think you could be a little more descriptive though, make sure not to over-use the dialogue and make it drown out the text and thoughts. Adding little thoughts or feelings here and there also makes the story a lot mroe belivable ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| jijfsjnnp chapter 17 . 12/1/2007 "I just wanted to be popular." XD No, Wolven, don't jump on the bandwagon! I liked the death fics. They screwed with my emotions, which proves that they were good. So there. Aangst fics work too, though. This one was particularly sweet. I can see it in my head perfectly. Hahaha... Toph's such a critic. |
| jijfsjnnp chapter 15 . 12/1/2007 How sad! Ah... makes me squirm. |
| Chakram Soldier chapter 17 . 12/1/2007 you are better at the non death ones. keep writing. |
| Butterfree chapter 1 . 11/30/2007 lol, I'd really label this as 'short and sweet' XD Great job on keeping everyone in character! ~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
| avatarfan16 chapter 15 . 11/30/2007 Truly sad, It's weird I kinda hate Taang angst, but I also kinda like it too. Still good story, keep them coming |
| avatarfan16 chapter 12 . 11/30/2007 Excellent! The perfect sequel. I am truly jealous, I wish I had thought of this idea. I want more, you should totally write another one. Please! avatarfan16 |
| avatarfan16 chapter 11 . 11/30/2007 Great chapter, your best one and my favorite. Aang's gonna get some lovin' |