|Reviews for Cry|
| MFF0405 chapter 2 . 11/15/2016
The way you write is just...so...captivating. I have no words. *gets up from chair*
| delia cerrano chapter 14 . 12/25/2015
So much angst! The trio never seems to catch a break. I hope the next story, "Creep", will be a happier one for the children, Narcissa. and Severus.
| XxElementalStormxX chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
| BlazeVein chapter 9 . 7/19/2014
stupid granger stupid girl .
| Emberflames7 chapter 14 . 4/28/2013
Your stories are not good for my health. However this was bloody brilliant. I think my favorite line was when Theodore Nott said,
"Ladies and Gentlemen, things are about to get interesting."
| Griffin Raven chapter 12 . 4/6/2013
Personally if I was Severus I'd want to get Harry along with his two friends Draco & Hermione out of Hogwarts & perhaps even out of country as far away from all of those dunderheaded idiots who are trying to blame an innocent Harry for the crime of attacking Hermione! I do think that all three children would be better off out of
that vicious, hateful place because Hogwarts no longer seems to a safe place for innocent children to learn & be
educated about there magic instead its become something much worse that it ever was even during the height of Voldemort's rapage across magical Britain! Wonder how Hermione's parents will react towards the attack upon there little girl & will they have been told the truth or only half-truths or downlike lies?
| Griffin Raven chapter 8 . 4/6/2013
Whilst everyone whom the matter doesn't concern but seem so intent upon interferring also seem to under the assumption that Severus & Lily actually were intimate together when infact the truth is that they didn't but that Harry is there son because of a potion that Lily asked Severus to brew...however I shudder to think how certain
idiots such as that bumbling minister Fudge would act if he had this information! I'm surprised that Fudge hasn't tried anything further to get Harry out of the school if he considers an 11yr old child such a dangerous monster
just because of the incident with Lando Fester? Amazing how quickly a person can go from being toted as the savior "the-boy-who-lived" to a dangerous monster so quickly...yet Fudge said nothing about the many numerous
attacks upon Harry since he started the school & the previous child abuse he'd suffered so every person can only
handle so much before they crack!
| Griffin Raven chapter 2 . 4/5/2013
Regardless of what potion Lily had asked Severus to brew for her unborn son...it was still sure'll accidental magic that caused Harry's magic to strike out at his tormentors & its not at all likely that the poor boy had any conscious control over it at all! But now that Severus has seen Harry's memory of him being attacked just what will Severus do to the three Slytherin students who were involved...even if it was only one Slytherin student who actually used magic against Harry? More importantly how will the rest of the students react towards Harry once word of what happened (or at least the exaggerated version of what happened) but also how will the rest of the staff behave towards Harry? In light of what has now been revealed by Harry's memories will Severus be informing anyone of what Lily asked him to do or the potion he brew for her baby or will he remain quite for now? Will Severus alter his behaviour towards Harry at all? Its almost as if Harry needs a full-time house elf guarding him from attack every moment of the day!
| Griffin Raven chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Personally considering just how bad things are for little Harry that would it be better for his wellbeing & both his
emotional & mental health if the poor wee lad left Hogwarts...because I truly do fear that someday one of those
who are taunting/bullying him so aggressively just might go to far an inflect a very serious injury upon Harry or even worse! It almost seems as if every student is against Harry either because of who he is "the-boy-who-lived" or because he dared to be sorted into "Slytherin" house?
| Scarlett Muhayo chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
i just started reading this and it made me tear
i feel soooooo sad for harry but i still have to say i am amazed at your writing style.
I know it is too early but i have to say it.
i adore this story
it is a work of art
keep on writing
| NBB chapter 14 . 11/7/2012
Wow... Really interesting story. I love the Draco-Hermione-Harry friendship triangle.
Off to read "Creep" now !
| Blake2020 chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
| Hortensia chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Your story has been added to the community You Could be Great, You Know... This C2 contains stories where Harry is sorted in Slytherin.
| twisterblake2010 chapter 3 . 8/2/2010
hey great chapter
| Polish chapter 14 . 3/2/2010
Hoe snap you know how to spin a good yarn! wow! ok, this was awesome! no really you've done a great job on this! I loved it!