This... Is amazing!

I'm pretty sure uzuki is her last name.

I would appreciate if you would go back and write something that takes place after after the fourth shinobi war involved now though in the demon priestess is it like an idea how to do it I can suggest suggestions

I wish there was a tayuya one but good work

I had an idea of a story you wrote here that what if something like this could have happened and that the island itself affecting your brain chemistry. that caused kurenai &hinata although the personalities. after leaving the island kurenai used Jitsu wipe the memory of the events on the island

You did a very good job because I really enjoyed reading this luck writing more stories!P.S. I think that making Tsunade and Mei younger so that they could have children with Naruto.

This is a good chapter

That will do since I will review this page with my name and then the location of this chapter

Can you do more chapters please like with sara or with other girls

Love the story, very well written. You should consider doing a sequel to this story with some of the newer girls from the show for example Konan, Ryuzetsu, or Sora.

could you do a naruto and krystal fox and renamon and all knochies
for the next chapture

I am sorry if I seem rude by saying this but I am tired of people saying the whiskers were from the kyuubi it is proven that he had them after he was born before the kyuubi was sealed in him. Otherwise I loved this, it was great and I honestly wouldn't change anything else, which is rare for me. Kudos to you sir/ma'am.

I liked the idea of the story/s but you need to edit them alot.

you use the same words over and over when referencing someones cock, tits and so on.

you do things like this.
*Naruto's cock was hard because he was aroused so his cock was hard* you only need to mention what you are talking about once in the same paragraph.

use other names and words if you need to refer to a subject in question.
*the young Medic treated the injured person with her expert skills* only need to say who and what once.

I would also have had these stories separate, that way they could have been broken up and not a long wall of text, it takes hrs to read each story if not days.

Just a suggestion, make another naruto lemon, but have it as a storyline. Oh yah, and the part where every single time they r on a island and the kyuubi spills the love is getting repetitive. Otherwise, this is an amazing story

Man! u SIR are a great writer!
This Naruto hinata & Kurenai's pairing is the best one man
this is also the best lemon fanfic i have read in my life..just too good...Thanks for writing these :)