Reviews for Naruto Deserted Island
SPIKE SPIEGEL chapter 4 . 2/10
This... Is amazing!
Darkking the darkness chapter 2 . 1/24
I'm pretty sure uzuki is her last name.
Lenny mosca chapter 9 . 1/17
I would appreciate if you would go back and write something that takes place after after the fourth shinobi war involved now though in the demon priestess is it like an idea how to do it I can suggest suggestions
That guy chapter 10 . 12/31/2014
I wish there was a tayuya one but good work
lennymosca chapter 6 . 12/21/2014
I had an idea of a story you wrote here that what if something like this could have happened and that the island itself affecting your brain chemistry. that caused kurenai &hinata although the personalities. after leaving the island kurenai used Jitsu wipe the memory of the events on the island
Guest chapter 30 . 12/13/2014
You did a very good job because I really enjoyed reading this luck writing more stories!P.S. I think that making Tsunade and Mei younger so that they could have children with Naruto.
Czar Joseph chapter 5 . 11/12/2014
This is a good chapter
Czar Joseph chapter 11 . 11/12/2014
That will do since I will review this page with my name and then the location of this chapter
Guest chapter 4 . 11/7/2014
Can you do more chapters please like with sara or with other girls
JTZ29 chapter 7 . 10/20/2014
Love the story, very well written. You should consider doing a sequel to this story with some of the newer girls from the show for example Konan, Ryuzetsu, or Sora.
Reid hinds chapter 27 . 10/17/2014
could you do a naruto and krystal fox and renamon and all knochies
for the next chapture
TheInnerBeast chapter 17 . 10/15/2014
I am sorry if I seem rude by saying this but I am tired of people saying the whiskers were from the kyuubi it is proven that he had them after he was born before the kyuubi was sealed in him. Otherwise I loved this, it was great and I honestly wouldn't change anything else, which is rare for me. Kudos to you sir/ma'am.
SPY46 chapter 26 . 10/15/2014
I liked the idea of the story/s but you need to edit them alot.

you use the same words over and over when referencing someones cock, tits and so on.

you do things like this.
*Naruto's cock was hard because he was aroused so his cock was hard* you only need to mention what you are talking about once in the same paragraph.

use other names and words if you need to refer to a subject in question.
*the young Medic treated the injured person with her expert skills* only need to say who and what once.

I would also have had these stories separate, that way they could have been broken up and not a long wall of text, it takes hrs to read each story if not days.
naruhina lemon l chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Just a suggestion, make another naruto lemon, but have it as a storyline. Oh yah, and the part where every single time they r on a island and the kyuubi spills the love is getting repetitive. Otherwise, this is an amazing story
rkss1995 chapter 6 . 9/18/2014
Man! u SIR are a great writer!
This Naruto hinata & Kurenai's pairing is the best one man
this is also the best lemon fanfic i have read in my life..just too good...Thanks for writing these :)
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