Reviews for Naruto Deserted Island
spanky1988.ajw chapter 30 . 7/5
Can't wait for the sequel to Naruto deserted island my buddy!
Taos144 chapter 1 . 5/14
I like this fic. Is there ever going a squeal
YeagerMeister31 chapter 29 . 2/14
Well this was interesting was kind of surprised that Tsunade was mentioned a lot the lemon was good also she is smoking hot the epilogue was unexpected but after Tsunade was mentioned a lot I suspected something like that might happen
YeagerMeister31 chapter 27 . 2/12
Well this was great Kurenai and Anko are both smoking hot babes, the whole chapter was funny and awesome minus the last part where Hinata was mentioned but I'll just forget that even happened
YeagerMeister31 chapter 24 . 2/11
Well this sure was different Naruto and Guren is not common but it was cool, The lemon was cool the dildo was a surprise but like u said a first time for everything overall another good chapter
YeagerMeister31 chapter 23 . 2/11
Well this was great NaruAnko is one of my fav pairings so glad I finally read this one the whole chapter was cool loved the fact that Anko just tagged along and it wasn't really a mission but her own drinking vocation, She's such a tease and it's funny NaruAnko are both so similar at there both hated by there village there pariah's I loved the whole chapter. The whole lemon was different with the bondage theme but not surprised with Anko strangely enough. Was confused when it mentioned that the NaruTen thing happened a few weeks earlier but yet he's still a virgin that was confusing.

The epilogue was funny surprised there was no comment from Jiraiya after Tsunade's but I think the last part of him watching his godson and Anko made it OK. Overall another good chapter can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 22 . 2/10
Well NaruTen is quite cute and my 6th fav pairing after Sakura Ino, Yugao, Anko and Tayuya with Temari after that. Now the story was great it's cool seeing them like that Naruto being his normal caring self the lemon was great personally the Epilogue was the worst ever in my view i can understand Hinata liking Naruto but WTFF it's supposed to me NaruTen not NaruTenHina I mean it's the worst pairing in the universe, especially as she said Naruto's all hers i could understand a one shot but sharing with that pathetic weak, minded, backboneless women is a joke sorry if that offends u just my opinion and it completely ruined the whole chapter in my opinion.
YeagerMeister31 chapter 21 . 2/10
Well i really liked this chapter NaruIno is my second fav pairing after NaruSaku so I'm glad I finally read it I think Ino in this chapter was perfect and u did her character proud. There wasn't much interaction really of course Ino told Sakura after Naruto beat Neji that she was jealous of Sakura to be on the same team and Naruto and Sasuke. But then again the only interaction after that was Sai's introduction and that was brief only Naruto arriving as backup for Team 10 was a decent interaction.

Personally I'm not surprised how she found out about the Kyuubi with most NaruIno stories I've read she always finds out by mistake. Other then that it was an enjoyable read the lemon was also great and the Epilogue was cool also and they make a cute couple in my opinion
YeagerMeister31 chapter 20 . 2/9
Well this was great Koyuki is actually one of my fav girls not one of the main ones though and also not a common pairing I might add but she's hot none the less, The chapter was different because of the snow and all that, I loved the lemon also although there was only the one actual full on sex unlike the others but she's not a ninja so I'm betting the stamina wasn't there but no worries I loved the Epilogue and people finding out it was funny seeing Jiraiya's reaction plus Kakashi's and Shizune's well not surprised would have loved to have seen Sakura's reaction. Although i was surprised Sakura was hardly mentioned in this chapter but oh well it's not about her after all, Now I don't want to say that she always has to be involved but Naruto only ever though of Sakura so the fact she was hardly mentioned kind of threw me, not that Koyuki even knew Naruto liked Sakura or maybe she did I don't know, Actually I think this is the first chapter where he barely thought of her at all. Not that it's a bad thing though. I can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 18 . 2/8
Well this was different but kind of what i imagined really still another great chapter and nice kinky animalistic lemon
YeagerMeister31 chapter 17 . 2/8
Well this was great NaruHana can't say that I've read many but what i have read are cool this was another one the lemon was great also
YeagerMeister31 chapter 16 . 2/8
Well this was great i admit Tsunade is a bit old but she still looks attractive although she does have a Genjutsu on, I loved the individual lemons the lesbian part well it was OK I guess although i personally prefer guy/girl and not really girl/girl and defo NOT guy/guy. Nice 3 part series though although I never read part 2 can't wait for more though, NaruHana next could be fun
YeagerMeister31 chapter 14 . 2/6
Well i must say very interesting another great chapter NaruSaku always great add in Tsunade well still weird but it was great also
YeagerMeister31 chapter 10 . 2/6
Well that was enjoyable Can't say I've read many NaruShizune pairing stories unless it's one shots but it is cool a bro/sister thing changing into love is cool plus there not blood related. Overall a great chapter strange that it was on the boat unlike the others but still good overall
YeagerMeister31 chapter 8 . 2/5
Well that was different but also great She's a smoking hot Kitty Cat lol Another nice chapter with a cool pairing
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