Reviews for Naruto Deserted Island
KlausMikelson chapter 23 . 8/21
awww man, I was expecting Jiraiya to get caught spying, lol
SHIPWRECK-5897 chapter 2 . 8/12
Rest in Peace Freedom guard. You will be missed.
Lenny m chapter 4 . 7/7
I just say very impressive and very believable the story you made it the lemon seem romantic so good job and thank you
origami uzachia chapter 2 . 7/6
I love the second chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30
Dam you can write
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30
Holy Hera! Idk how u do it u r the best author I've read in a while please do into and choji. Or shikamaru and temari
Seth chapter 1 . 5/23
I have to tell you that I very much enjoyed this story. When writing a story it's important to paint a picture in the mind of the reader of what is happening and you did it perfectly. And what's more, you kept it exactly parallel to the show itself. Even the intimate moments and the love making. You made sure to include that bit in there but did it in such a unique way that it didn't deviate or twist the characters at all. Beautifully done my friend beautifully done. Keep writing stories like this for Naruto. You have a great talent so don't let it be wasted! Keep it up! :D
B1ackAshes chapter 2 . 4/28
I'm quite enjoying this fic. It's very well-written, nicely detailed and the lemon sections are quite tasteful. All in all, an exquisite story.
blacklightning1 chapter 25 . 4/11
I really like your story so far
Guest chapter 2 . 3/26
This chapter was good, but I think you got mixed up with Yugao's name; Uzuki is her family name, like Uzumaki is Naruto's family name. It made reading the chapter a little confusing
Mr.fabulous177 chapter 30 . 3/5
It would be amazing if you would do a Naruto kurotsuchi Chapter because you never find any good fics about them and id love to see them on a deserted Island. Granted Kurotsuchi would not like Naruto at first but we all know that Naruto can get anybody to like him.
SPIKE SPIEGEL chapter 4 . 2/10
This... Is amazing!
Darkking the darkness chapter 2 . 1/24
I'm pretty sure uzuki is her last name.
Lenny mosca chapter 9 . 1/17
I would appreciate if you would go back and write something that takes place after after the fourth shinobi war involved now though in the demon priestess is it like an idea how to do it I can suggest suggestions
That guy chapter 10 . 12/31/2014
I wish there was a tayuya one but good work
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