Reviews for Luffy's Swim
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Not long enough
Princess-Orlaith chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
That...was incredible. Love it. Simple...yet so...refreshing. The way its described makes me feel I'm on the Merry...cliché? Too bad ;D
But serioulsy, I never thought of life on a ship that way. Seems real nice
Lyneel chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
wonderful - the idea is so simple, yet amazing :)
yuMeNami chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Hmm..It was lovely. :)
Lazielow chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Awesome job !
AllHeroesWearHats chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
This was wonderfully written and i loved every part of it - It felt so right, the way that you wrote this.

Butterfree chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Aww, that was such a short and sweet one-shot. I think this would suit as a short and subtle conclusion to that arc.

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)
OrpheumZero chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
A nice little story. It's interesting to this about how exactly Luffy would try to swim if he could find an alternative that wouldn't involve him nearly drowning.
bforbrigitta chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
The portrayal of both Luffy and Nami was much more "realistic" than most (surprisingly) inaccurate fics. It's hard to make sense at this time of night xD But you created a vivid imagery either way, somewhat bittersweet.

It was lovely. Great job!
Buni-San chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
I'm incredibly touched! The way you described the motions almost had me getting seasickness! lol good job!
Bhlue chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
That was.. incredibly inspiring.. :) I almost broke a tear...almost. ;D
Basil chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Random sappy "This was cool!" comment here.
Azamiko chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 12/2/2007

That was fantastic, and I ain't impressed easy when it comes to writing. So lightly romantic with a touched of angst and tons of depth. Fantastic work.
CherrySkull101 chapter 1 . 11/19/2007

that was good

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