Reviews for Nine Words
left-to-leave chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
I loved this one too! There are too many amazing parts that I could cite, but I'd end up quoting the entire thing back to you, so just take my word that it was touching and adorable and so perfectly Jake.

This scene makes me squee uncontrollably, as did this fic; it's nice to finally have words for everything Jake is feeling during those three intense seconds between "Fine!" and "Okay, this isn't working..." :)

Also, completely random side remark: I say the word "a'sploding" all the time! :-P

Adding this one to my favorites as well.
xXriujooXx chapter 1 . 11/30/2007
Oh man, I loved this! So sweet!
JenniGirl1 chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
AWW! That was so SWEET! I love it!
Terrorking Tragedian chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
Interesting. Very interesting. It was short, but straight to the point, and not to mention sweet! It was a really poignant moment between the two lovers, yet in the show this part of the scene lasted for no more than three seconds! Now THAT is creativity!

I've seen plenty of people write (and fail) short little stories based on episode scenes. (Alas, I myself am included.) In a way, you've inspired me. Thank you!

I shall rate this a healthy 8/10. You deserve it!

Terrorking Tragedian
XxXHalfwayToForeverXxX chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
That was really good!

Great description and writing

What a beautiful pairing they are
nazgurl92 chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
awesome description and writing!