Reviews for Naruto: The Spartan King
Guest chapter 2 . 8/22
Old man I'm not angry you kept this a secret from me for 15 years lets forgets about that and continue. I'm not in a any way angry for, oh I don't know, withholding my heratige, stunting my growth and lying to me for 15 years, you might not of ever told me if I had not found out about this scroll so it's alright let's just move on because I am a demon or don't have a brain if I accept this
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21
Extremely stupid I say.. You need a lot of work. On your mind not your stories.. You need to be able to come up with interesting ideas rather than plain ideas. Ones that would help readers become interested not bored the moment they walk here.
namekaze26 chapter 10 . 4/8/2015
this story is absolutely awesome, please write more!
Hakkyou30 chapter 5 . 12/26/2014
Yugao hime should be in the harem.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/16/2014
How does he have a clan compound that is 10 acers realy where did you get your brain at?pep stores or what!? The beginning i read not even half way i trashed it this fic is trash!
killer4853 chapter 2 . 8/15/2014
like
Rebmul chapter 8 . 6/24/2014
uh this says complete but it doesn't look complete
Rebmul chapter 2 . 6/24/2014
oh good lord its a zabuza fan boy
meowy1986 chapter 2 . 11/6/2013
err i remember readign this story back ALONG time ago and thought it was awesome..but after rereading up to the 2nd chapter its like errr ok its nto as good as i thought.. i mean !; i dont mind zabuza beingwell fan boy its kinda funny comedy kinda thing..but 2: naruto is only at least jounin lvl after training for 30,000 days 82 years round up a lil cuz of leap year..so that would more training and shit then even madara and harashima ever had...he should be at least above kage lvl easily
hercules 151 chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
naruto heir of hercules and leonidas
HalfwayParanoid chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
...uh...cool idea, writting great; OOCness not so cool. Could have worked if you had Zabuza be fanguyish in his head and engaged from there, but otherwise, I just couldn't stomach it. Sorry, still a cool idea though.
reptoholic chapter 9 . 3/18/2013
Awesome story I am looking forward to the sequel if you are still planning on doing it.
unexpected sabotage chapter 2 . 12/23/2012
Oc Zabuza has forced me to imagine him with pigtails in a sailor fuku outfit jumping up and down with a teddy bear in his arms and crappy make up on his face... I don't know whether to curse you for the image or thank you for the laugh lol
Hagone nara chapter 10 . 12/18/2012
love your stories
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
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