Reviews for The King |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh My God! I loved it! The last stanza was perfect for it, it went together so well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang! This is really sad! Great job! :) |
![]() ![]() extra ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehe funny and insane just like hichi - |
![]() ![]() ![]() personally, i find the humpty dumpty line takes away from your peom. mostly because the two hate eachother right? so why would the horse -want- to put ichigo back together? just a little something to consider. again, we don't know their relationship so it's hard to really give an opinion. but i liked it, and that's all that matters right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the feel of it. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was i dont know...breathtaking? no i have no clue. but i loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow..That was amazing...This is definitely going on my favorites list! Keep on writing! Ja ne, Gohan'sUltimatePower |