Well. I think I liked it way more just reading chapt 1 to 10 and stray to 25th. The in between are real messy. But they do have potential.
Meh good job anyway .

Haa this chap is good.
I liked the flow, and you did explain some things! Congrat ;) (i am being bitchy I know).
Still, anyone would love to know how the hell Sasuke tricked Hinata into banging and bam pregnant first try?!

Hi there.
I read your story twice, well it wasn't finished when I started it the first time. I stumbled on it when looking for some kakanaru.
I am fairly sure that I did not review the first time.
What I remembered the most was the scene of Naru reading IchaIcha out loud for Kashi. Real funny.
I think you have a good kind of humour and usually you can transcript it well.

Still, there are some thing you need to work on, which I've seen on some of your recent reviews.
The first 5 chapter are absolutely erratic for starters.

We don't know how old Naruto is, we learn too late that Sakura and Sasuke are chunnin. So I thought at first that they were genin and so I thought Naruto to be about 12. And he was so immature in your characterization that it did fit. It was really disturbing when we found out he was 15... I was like, WTF? How the hell can he be so childish.
You make him as a deadlast but you explain too late that he is not. And how the hell sasuke is chunin and not naruto? Sorry to say it doesn't make sense if you don't explain it. Ther are other inconsistencies but I am not that hardcore ;).

Secondly, you forget some info you give us. In the tent scene before Naru get captured, Kashi shows Naru his face. Next chap or so, after they wake up Naru gives some sad-ass speech to Tsunade to try and explain his feelings on Kashi, he says he wanna see under the mask... And lets not talk about the speech. It's half good for me. Get's boring too. And is not really belivable to me... Tsunade and him seem to be quite close. He discovered when he was close to death and in coma that he loves Kashi. So I am not sure I understand why he just doesn't say so to Tsunade...
You should have a doc. with a recap of important info you give for each chap, so as not to forget and give a whiplash to your readers .

I also totally agree whith the bashing... First of Sakura bashing, while not too much in the first chapt (cause anyway, you never tell us about anybody but Naru and Kashi) gets a bit too much middle story. Let's not forget she is rather good medic. I didn't read past chapt 19 yet, so I reserve judgement for later bashing ;).

I am not sure about Kyuubi and Naruto's relashionship, or Kakashi merging his chakra with Naru, or why Kakashi seems unable to trace Naruto's scent when he is rumored to be a good tracker hence the pack of dogs, or about Kashi needing kamui to beat karin of all people... why you introduced Tenzo but not the other anbu who shows his face to Sakura, what purpose does it serve? Showing his face looks pointless... Also I did not understand how Sasu beat Suigetsu, but I understand battle is not your thing , are you implying that Choji is married with Ino? Or someone else? Sasuke getting Hinata pregnant when? Hinata pregnant and also in asylum? ? Wtf? Sorry girl your starting loosing me on chapt 19... but I will try to go on since people commend your story. And 5/6 chapt is fast to read anyway .

Sorry for the not so nice review but you can do better I am sure .
The plot is great. And Kakanaru is so cute and you can plot so many plot from that ship !

Mada mada dane... But thanks for the good read.
Xox.

I was almost wishing for a sequel but nonetheless, good fic!

Finally!

Why tf are they still playing around?! Didn't they just got a huge blow of life? Like almost 'losing eo, opens their eyes to be direct' instead of still trolling around.

I think both of them are still high from drugs of they're still playing that game.

Finally!
Fuck! I was so damn scared! I thought it'll follow the clichéd amnesia plot.
Even if there's a lot to heal from trauma & health, I'm glad they're finally back!

Wtf?! How tf the scene changed so swiftly for pranks to This?!

I feel my ears burning.

Ajaagajsjhsvsbsbshshshsjsjsb! He's so Evil!

That was...

OMFG!
Why tf do people have a silly smile, grin or smirk when they're embarrassed?!
I can't control my face! I'm very bad at poker face!

Ale bad boy z tego kakashiego

What does "Men quit on women for me, I don't quit on women for men" mean?