WOW! the story was amazing dude, 5 stars! *faves*

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Wow holy shit that took forever to read but it was worth it :D awesome job. I laughed, cried, and almost threw my computer out the window from all the drama and angst. Thanks for a great story and the cute alternate ending. I lovedit!

Okay, so I read the whole thing and discovered...that there was sex! XD LOVE IT! WRITE MORE! :3

omg I love this story! can u make another one lol one with more smex!

ONE WORD. MASTERPIECE.

(I loved the ending! Even if it did cost me to read till 3AM, it was so worth it.) D:

Oh god. 6 more chapters. GAH.

I don't care how long it takes!

I'm reading all night, and probably on into tomorrow.

But, this story is like a DRUG.

I can't help but read more. D:

“The public baths? Hells no, Sai hangs out there! You know he likes to rape me with his eyes!”

I will NEVER forget this line.

I laughed way to hard. D

O-MI-GOD...NO SEX? NO~! Man, I skipped to the last chap for the sex~~! Meanie! *pout* Anyways, when I go back and read the full thing I'll review again, but from the last chapter...I L-O-V-E Y-O-U-!-! :D You are A-W-E-S-O-M-E! :3

this story was really good before you started the kidnap naruto arc. This story should have just been about Kakashi and Naruto's relationship. It seems as if you tried to add action, or conflict, to make the story more appealing; but you totally did not need it.

omg! haha! i loved this story so much! You did an awesome job! i added it to my favorites list yayy!

This chapter was so funny. I was so thrilled with the way Kakashi acted and the things he said were GREAT! Please write another long Naruto fic. Preferably a YamaKaka one.

I have only read up to chapter 5, but this story is good so far. I really like how your characterization of Kakashi is how I think he acts in the anime.

That was the greatest story I have ever read! Your story made me laugh, smile, and cry. In my book if a story has all of that then it is the greatest! I can't believe I missed this! Nicely done. I loved everything about it!

Ehh... I really liked the original version because it had more plot. It also deepened the relationship between Kakashi and Naruto. Plus it also showed what happened to the other characters of the story. Overall, the 24 chapters were rather well. Lol there were a lot of cliffhangers though, which I think is a good thing. Good job.

Awesome story! I loved it. I’m so happy that I found a decent KakaNaru. Not that other fics are bad, but I’ve wanted to read one like this for AGES.

First I’ve got to say I’m sorry though. After you’d finished this fic I went on your profile and saw your list of pet-peeves... and realised that I’d already done 1 and 2. I add fics to favourites/alert without reviewing because I like to review when they’re completed so I can sum up all my thoughts and feelings at once. I can understand your opinion about reviews though, and I didn’t intend to come across as lazy even though I probably did anyway, so I’m really sorry.

As I’ve said though, I really liked this. The plot was great! And I thought the way you described all the situations and the characters reactions to them was flawless. You seemed to take your time building their relationship up and I loved the characterization. Particularly Kakashi’s because you seemed to get his personality just right. Not that you didn’t with Naruto, but I’ve heard Kakashi can be hard to keep in character sometimes, and I’m guessing that it’s even harder when he’s one of the main characters. It’s probably the most convincing KakaNaru I’ve read. It was also really well written - I don’t think there were more than five spelling/grammar mistakes throughout.

I think my favourite bits would have to be the battle of wits between Kakashi and Naruto (SO funny and clever at times...) and the in-depth conversation between them both in chapter 22. And chapter 24... Well, when I first read it, I actually thought the kink was... Unneeded? Too sudden considering it was their first time? (I think it was their first anyway)... But after reading it a few more times, I think you did a really good job. I love how Naruto started it off before it turned into one of Kakashi’s kinky fantasies xD

So yeah, overall it was fantastic! I hope to read more from you in the future, and I’m sorry again for not reviewing sooner _