This Chapter was, unbelievably good :-)

This Chapter was Powerful :-)

Well it's official :-) You're Evil Genius! This is Masterpiece!

I loved chapter 24, the best chapter I thought, that and 10and 11.

AMAZING! THIS STORY IS AMAZING!

Overall I liked the whole story. I will admit I loved this alternate ending a little more than the kidnapping version, although the smut was fan-freaking-tastic from the other ending!
Some bits confused me, like when Chouji was worried about Shikamaru after the Asuma incident. Then Asuma was with Kurenai a few chapters later, I suppose that could have been the incident Chouji was referring to but the context made it seem like it was referring to Asuma dying.
I did like the story a lot though and I enjoyed reading the whole thing in one sitting!

This story was a-mazing! Kakashi and Naruto made me laugh so much with their bickering :')
You surprised me so much and made me shocked as I kept reading, you're a great writer! Keep up the great work! :3

Owww how sweet!

nice story, although i have to say that i like chapter 25 more maybe because i don't really like angst where naruto gets mutilated or something, hehe. i like fluffy stuff and emotional stuff, but not much angst and the like. U
the development for their feelings could have been more elaborated so that the reader gets a more fluent style (can i say that? o.O). but still a nice take on the pairing! :)

Wait, wait, wait… BLUE?!

WTF WRONG with you? My head hurts from having to read that. Talk about super freak _

Ahh, why must all good things come to an end!? .
heh, well anywho, i absolutely adored this story!:3 Thanks so much for writing it! & keep on with your amazingness _

Thank GOD you censored it! I nearly gagged multiple times... You couldn't have made it a yaoi version of Icha Icha?

Pft, tracker in clothes, how exagerated and funny!

loved the lemon

Wow, I REALLY love this story. I find it hard to get attached to KakaNaru fics for some reason but you had me hooked from the begining!