|Reviews for By Chance|
| narutogirl chapter 4 . 1/23
| ilovehinata4ever chapter 27 . 1/16
It's beautiful! ߘʰߒٰߑϰߑϰߑͰߑ͠love it... especially tis part: And tonight girl its only you and me-;)
| Kashlazy chapter 19 . 1/12
This is so sad, Naruto why didn't you realize it earlier!
| ilovehinata4ever chapter 28 . 12/27/2013
Awesome story:) I always did wonder what would have happened if pinky was not on team 7 imstead hinata was in team 7:) love the part where sasuke came back n totally the narutem moments cute! continue?:3
| Fher34 chapter 28 . 12/7/2013
happy ending and before u say anything!, I'm a sucker for happy endings. Hehe. :D
| Fher34 chapter 27 . 12/7/2013
What. The. Heck. D: no! !
I've liked your story so far but...Hinata is extremely strong when her loved ones are involved. She wouldn't have cried. She would have fought until the end. You made her seem pathetic in this chapter. And a lot like an immature sakura. Gah u killed my hopes for hime right here *sigh. The story was good. One more chapter to go. Lets see how good it is.
| XXXfutureXXXpopstarXXX101 chapter 28 . 11/15/2013
Hey can I continue This for you. I will still tell people it is yours
| TheSadMachine chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
I remember this story xD I loved it from the beginning to end. This actually sealed my love for sasuhina. :D
| hateme101 chapter 28 . 6/18/2013
love it. But you should do a story where Hinata goes with him or where after the years of being orochimaru he comes back for her
| EveryVillianIsLemon2.0 chapter 28 . 1/31/2013
Cute! Love your story and the SasuHina pairing!
| pinksamurai1014 chapter 28 . 11/2/2012
Damn...This WAS da'BOMB!
| woodlandfairykirk chapter 28 . 9/26/2012
I like Hinata waaaay better on team 7, since now everything makes more sense(: good Job!
| Emerald Ashes chapter 28 . 8/3/2012
Oh my gosh! You actually managed to make Sasuke's betrayal tragic again! I was holding my breath for these past few chapters, hoping that he wouldn't go through with it, as my heart sank a little more with each milestone.
You did an absolutely beautiful job with this fic. You made these two characters work together. Hinata provided a kind, comforting, stable presence in Sasuke's life. He pushed her to become stronger and helped her gain confidence. Your other couples (Sakura/Kiba and Naruto/Temari) were unexpected, but pulled off well. Kiba and Sakura seem like the type to be constantly arguing and making up. Naruto and Temari was sudden, yet utterly adorable. I'm glad you didn't make either OOC for the sake of the main pairing, or force NaruSaku where it didn't fit.
I love how much Hinata grew over the course of the fic, although her absolute breakdown when Sasuke left was rather depressing. Sasuke, too, opened up in a way that felt natural.
On the technical side, there were a few typos and tense issues, but not enough to take away from the quality of the writing.
Thanks for writing such a wonderful fic. It is undoubtedly the most in-character, epic example of SasuHina I have ever read and one of the better Naruto fics I've found. While it saddens me that you have left fanfiction, I wish you luck with your original fiction. If you ever publish, you should put a link to the book on your profile. I would definitely want to check it out :) Sorry for rambling!
| Emerald Ashes chapter 15 . 8/2/2012
I'm really enjoying this fic, so far. This is following along with canon, but varies enough to keep my interest. Even better, you've taken two characters that never shared a word in canon and made them into a believable pairing. It's adorable how Sasuke is growing jealous and defending her from Neji. I wonder how he'll react when Neji beats her up in the prelims? Then again, I suppose she'll be able to hold her own a bit better, after gaining some confidence and improving her skills. Maybe she'll even make it to the finals?
Sakura comes off as a bit obnoxious, but, then, she was kind of a jerk at this point in the anime, anyway. Nice to see that she's beginning to crush on Kiba, though. I think you've actually avoided going OOC with her.
While the writing is generally good, you occasionally switch perspectives. For example: "Almost all the genin were glaring at you." when it should have been "glaring at us."
Thanks for the read, though I've still got quite a bit of reading left to do!
| jessica-semnadaprafaze123 chapter 28 . 7/31/2012
How beautiful! i love it.
it is a very cute sasuhina.
my favorite now.