|Reviews for Shirley|
| asdf chapter 9 . 10/28/2008
why havent you continued? A prequel is a million times better than a sequel!
And i'm glad you made shirley so much different from shana, i hates that small fry weak shimp, man, i just wanted to stab her eyes out through out the game, so damn weak.
| Breezybiatch chapter 9 . 6/4/2008
i really like the character personalities! but i really wana hear more belzab n shirly mush :D
| Sakura's Sonata chapter 3 . 3/1/2008
Wow...Awesome! Nice job! But it was a little confusing when you switched from different characters points of view. There didn't seem to be any transition between Belzac and Shirley's perspective, and the same thing happened with Zieg and Rose. Both sides of either romance told the same story, too. Other than that, this was really good!
| Kimmae chapter 3 . 12/12/2007
I like your intro, and I'm not sure if this is intentional, but you have a couple of paragraphs that are similar: The pillar falling on Shirley and Belzac, and the death of Kanzas and Zieg. Anyway, nice start!