Reviews for Exchanging a Dream For Reality
Guest chapter 4 . 2/2
I like it, cute idea, and Minato with Naruto are really cute, the only problem I have is Japanese, I think it's unnecessary. Just cause someone likes Naruto doesn't mean they have to know Japanese that well, I know that you use rather common words, but it's isn't even relevant to story, and it can put off people who don't know those words, since you don't translate them.
So I really think you should lose Japanese expect for like sama chan etc since that rather necessary
Guest chapter 6 . 8/22/2015
This is hilarious! After I laughed for the third time my husband looked over at me and said, "There's no way it can possibly be THAT funny." and I was just like it totally is.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/22/2015
LOL! This chapter was something else... If the rest of the chapter's are even remotely as funny as this one i'm gonna love this story.
marquis.shax chapter 22 . 12/5/2014
hmm why can't they just bring in Inoichi and have him scan Narutos memories and wipe out the ones from the kidnapping
marquis.shax chapter 17 . 12/4/2014
ok so far you've completely ignored the fact that the other half of the kyuubi was sealed within Minato himself and if his body an soul were absorbed into Naruto then so should the other half of the chakra
marquis.shax chapter 14 . 12/4/2014
ok wait this makes absolutely no sense to me. How can they know who Konan is (she was an absolute unknown before the fight with Pein) but not know about Nagato? Jiraiya was a mentor to Konan, Nagato, and Yahiko so it's safe to assume that if they know about Konan then Jiraiya should know that Nagato or Yahiko is alive and given the power that's being talked about Jiraiya should figure it's Nagato due to the Rinnegan
marquis.shax chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
if this was supposed to be a gathering of the Konoha 11 why did you not mention Kiba (and Akamaru), as well as TenTen and Hinata, you also didn't include Shika in the meeting
Guest chapter 31 . 11/29/2014
I loved it...I loved how naruto got turned into a wittle three year old I wished he stayed like that. I love how he kept getting scolded by minato you should've made naruto kept getting into trouble and being grounded I thought it was so cute. There was too much drama tho back to back to back like C'ome now
Guest chapter 21 . 10/27/2014
I liked the chapter but if you ment it when it said that girls are pathetic then you have no idea what a girl is capable of. Just because someone said something doesn't mean a girl would faint. Girls are tougher than you think and just because they are weaker than boys doesn't mean their pathetic
Manillalu chapter 5 . 5/21/2014
...they're ninja. Henge or something! I don't see why they can't go to ichirakus just cuz of that
Random chapter 6 . 4/20/2014
I really enjoy reading your story. It is quite interesting, but haven't they heard of henge?
Clove15 chapter 3 . 3/23/2014
Oh! What is going to happen
misuky7 chapter 31 . 12/23/2013
I adore this story, this is the first one I've read with Minato in it. This was really good. :3
Legendary lady chapter 31 . 10/23/2013
CrazyScythe chapter 4 . 10/7/2013
3 year old? Naruto has baby teeth, baby fat, and the physique of a 3 year old...all that time he must've put into conditioning his body is all gone lol.

Anyways, shouldn't Minato be burning down Konoha for treating his son worse than scum right about now?
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