Reviews for Exchanging a Dream For Reality
marquis.shax chapter 22 . 12/5/2014
hmm why can't they just bring in Inoichi and have him scan Narutos memories and wipe out the ones from the kidnapping
marquis.shax chapter 17 . 12/4/2014
ok so far you've completely ignored the fact that the other half of the kyuubi was sealed within Minato himself and if his body an soul were absorbed into Naruto then so should the other half of the chakra
marquis.shax chapter 14 . 12/4/2014
ok wait this makes absolutely no sense to me. How can they know who Konan is (she was an absolute unknown before the fight with Pein) but not know about Nagato? Jiraiya was a mentor to Konan, Nagato, and Yahiko so it's safe to assume that if they know about Konan then Jiraiya should know that Nagato or Yahiko is alive and given the power that's being talked about Jiraiya should figure it's Nagato due to the Rinnegan
marquis.shax chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
if this was supposed to be a gathering of the Konoha 11 why did you not mention Kiba (and Akamaru), as well as TenTen and Hinata, you also didn't include Shika in the meeting
Guest chapter 31 . 11/29/2014
I loved it...I loved how naruto got turned into a wittle three year old I wished he stayed like that. I love how he kept getting scolded by minato you should've made naruto kept getting into trouble and being grounded I thought it was so cute. There was too much drama tho back to back to back like C'ome now
Guest chapter 21 . 10/27/2014
I liked the chapter but if you ment it when it said that girls are pathetic then you have no idea what a girl is capable of. Just because someone said something doesn't mean a girl would faint. Girls are tougher than you think and just because they are weaker than boys doesn't mean their pathetic
Manillalu chapter 5 . 5/21/2014
...they're ninja. Henge or something! I don't see why they can't go to ichirakus just cuz of that
Random chapter 6 . 4/20/2014
I really enjoy reading your story. It is quite interesting, but haven't they heard of henge?
Clove15 chapter 3 . 3/23/2014
Oh! What is going to happen
misuky7 chapter 31 . 12/23/2013
I adore this story, this is the first one I've read with Minato in it. This was really good. :3
Legendary lady chapter 31 . 10/23/2013
CrazyScythe chapter 4 . 10/7/2013
3 year old? Naruto has baby teeth, baby fat, and the physique of a 3 year old...all that time he must've put into conditioning his body is all gone lol.

Anyways, shouldn't Minato be burning down Konoha for treating his son worse than scum right about now?
CrazyScythe chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
I thought yellow was sage chakra .

" "Yeah, that's right! The Akatsuki members Hidan and Kakazu were there, but none of them could pass through us! Shikamaru took out Hidan while I and Kakashi-sensei took Kakazu. But Kakashi-sensei couldn't have done a single thing against them if it wasn't for me and my new jutsu! He couldn't move after that hit! All his cells were demolished!" Naruto answered acting like his old self again. "

From this context, I can conclude that Naruto's a bloody psychopath who enjoys killing others.

" Naruto glared at him in response. "If we find Itachi we can either take him to Konoha or we kill him. But there's a catch in both of those opportunities. If we take him to Konoha . . . there is always a chance that he'll escape and devastation will break lose, and if we kill him, Sasuke will go berserk and kill Itachi's killer," Naruto continued while Tsunade stared at him with wondering eyes. "

Naruto makes it sound like taking another person's life is easy. I mean, if it's really that easy, I'd like to see Naruto skewer Itachi's heart with a dull spoon.
littlechirp chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
Why can't Naruto use a henge to return to his normal 15 year old body in daily activities? It's not gonna be hard to maintain for him and it'll make him more comfortable to move and converse with his friends.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/28/2013
I like it! It's great!
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