|Reviews for Shattered Reality|
| Draton chapter 3 . 12/26/2007
Oo, me likey. Pretty well written. Chapters are a little on the short side But then length has never been my strong suit.. Quality over Quantity and what not...
Mind you as a primary horde player you need an infusion of viscous and horrible violence... Whhe!
| Kadiir chapter 2 . 11/19/2007
So far, so good. Keep up the work!
Looks to me like you're doing okay with the description, so just keep writing like you did for this chapter, and you should be good.
| DeathswrdNinja chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
That was good. Keep it up
| Rahdovh chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
Very interesting story and loved the fighting scene. One recommendation that I would give is to give your characters more description. I can tell by the story that Rethian is the "too proud, too loud" type, but nothing much to build a description on. I will say that I don't see many first person stories on here and would like to see more of this story. Will be putting this in favorites.
Good story, and aside from beliefs, I do read most stories that are about WOW as I play both Alliance and Horde characters