Reviews for Camping Trouble!
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 2 . 8/6
Much better than chapter 0
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 1 . 8/6
I had no idea what was going on or who was talking half the time.
SwiftFeather chapter 2 . 5/2/2009
Phoenix Wright... xD I LOVE YOU! People who Plays Phoenix Wright, Likes Yaoi and fainting, and loves Prince of TEnnis is my GOOD FRIEND D
Speadee chapter 10 . 7/30/2008
Since it's been a long time, I had to go back and reread parts of the previous chapters.

Things are really getting weird. Let me guess... Oshitari's headache and not remembering what happened yesterday was from falling into the strange water and hitting his head.

Very funny about Inui and Yanagi fighting and predicting each other with probabilities! It's like Inui to have those juices.

I believe they would have homework. Some of the assignments sound unfair. How do the teachers expect the students to write plant and animal journals if there aren't any of those around?

It's like Kirihara to cheat in some way, and Shishido to show frustration. Did they happen to sit next to each other? I wonder what Kirihara wrote in the journal that interested Shishido.
Jaricchi chapter 10 . 5/20/2008
i want to clarify something. what was in Kei-chan's hair? seriously, what was it?i like it, it was funny!_

especially when they mizuki and Kei-chan were arguing in german and greek. please clarify why they were both speaking in different languages when they could have spoken in japanese or english. seriously..._that was the best part, except when Kei-cha fainted...hearts to you and your story!_
yumi2482 chapter 10 . 5/4/2008
wow
takari love chapter 10 . 5/3/2008
lol...That was very funny...

I really love the part when Yanagi punched Inui and the calculations they made and then, Inui commented "Renji, you're getting meaner these days." and Renji replied with a simple, "Oh."

and then Oshitari slummed down on his chair...lol

Don't know why but I found myself laughing alone, in the middle of the night, while reading this...lol

Well, ja ne...
EvCaCeLy chapter 7 . 5/3/2008
Your fanfic is really interesting. I was really surprised that atobe talked german, but there are some mistakes and i hope you don't mind me correcting some mistakes, because i was borned in Germany after all.

1. Heute ist ein schöner Tag

2. Wenn ich zurückgehe, dann ist er erledigt

3. Wenn er es wieder verliert, dann werde ich ihn töten

4. Ich sage dir zum letzten Mal, dass ich kein Griechisch verstehe.

I really like your fanfic.

EvCaCeLy
yumi2482 chapter 9 . 2/23/2008
that was hilarious
Yumemiya chapter 9 . 2/22/2008
Inui! I feel Inui in here. hmm...

I like that rubber duck, so funny XD

Hope the writer's block goes away soon.
Speadee chapter 9 . 2/21/2008
Good job on the suspense though the change in events was sudden! What exactly is going on? Is it some ghost or poison? How were Oishi and Oshitari able to be unaffected while in the water? Does Inui have something to do with it?
takari love chapter 9 . 2/20/2008
lol...hahaha

Bad forces are after

Heh, I wonder why though? Is it really the water? .

Well, can't wait for the next chapter...
Tacuma chapter 9 . 2/18/2008
Hope your writers block will be over soon! I liked this chapter! Please try to update soon!
snowdrops12 chapter 8 . 2/13/2008
Nice chapter!

i agrred with you about the pair, but my favourite is kaidohxInui or SanadaxAtobe
snowdrops12 chapter 7 . 2/13/2008
oh, poor Atobe! and yeah, Akutsu isnt a social guy...

Great chapter, I knew sanada would be a grea cook!
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