|Reviews for Legacy of the Rasengan III: Chuuten|
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/22
I have some suggestions
1. Orochimaru mentioned a clone of Minato who should be around Naruto's age. What if he's the one that raped Temari & Naruto is blamed bcos the baby's DNA is similar to his own.
2. There was a person with pein who defeated Gaara in his bijuu mode. Is he the clone?
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/30/2014
God damn it I wanted to see the fucking fight! Now I'm gonna have a bad day ::
| misoriri chapter 10 . 10/18/2014
so since this was a really good story, I checked out FictionReader98's account. however, I was unable to find this story. what happened?
| Greyfire34 chapter 10 . 4/12/2014
Wow... that just broke my heart... I really wanted to see what would become of Naruto and Hinata, and I love the way you write. I am really disappointed! Plus there's the fact that FictionReader98 hasn't made any new changes in the least.
| SnowCat21 chapter 10 . 2/19/2014
it saddens me to hear you have discontinued the story it was very well written it's my most favourite Naruto story
| Tomon chapter 10 . 11/5/2013
While I appreciate that you let us know what's happening. Is still quite sad, Especially given the fact the FictionReader98 want to finish his "Clash in the Land of Snow: Legacy Version!" first but that already took almost four years.
You seemed to have quite great plans for your story and I would love to see it finished
| connor.carrera chapter 6 . 8/12/2013
Please try to not put as many letters for the dividers.
| connor.carrera chapter 5 . 8/12/2013
Holly shit... which branch were you in? And what rank where you?
| connor.carrera chapter 3 . 8/12/2013
Actually it was Naruto that was tied to the pole the first time.
| Kurukato chapter 8 . 7/21/2013
Hey its my birthday too. I've been waiting like 2 months to put this. Anyways great series, I was really sad when I read it was discountined and that the next author hasn't dine anything with it. Hope you had a great birthday.
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/2/2013
Please pick this back up it seems that FictionReader98 did not start to write this story. if he did and i got the wrong one please link it to me, but it could not find it
| S. Laurence chapter 8 . 10/30/2012
Dude your birthday is July 21st? Give a cyber hi5 for that, finally I can share a birthday with someone.
| DocCBM chapter 10 . 9/12/2012
Not to be rude, but how about giving the story to someone who will actually write it. In case you didn't get it, today makes THREE YEARS with nothing!
| guest chapter 10 . 8/22/2012
FictionReader 98 please update
| compass96 chapter 10 . 8/7/2012
i loved your series. it depicted everything i expected Naruto to be. I was also impressed that you didn't let Gaara be abducted by Akatsuki. In my opinion that made a lot of to see you are not continuing the series. hope it's completed soon by your successor.