This whole thing is pretty funny, except that she didn't remember "the four times!"

I love it already! And I love Carrie's song, too!

I liked the premise, but I really hate that she ran away! It just doesn’t seem to fit with her character, I want her to speak to Edward directly like a grown up and find out what’s going on!

The plot seems so interesting and the story could have had so much potential, but the writing style makes it seem like something I would’ve made up when I was 8; rushing things, over-exaggerating events and making my own rules to see fit with my imagination.

Yay babies!

Really Bella you didn’t say I love you either. Jeeze!

I love how everyone wants the one who has been left and hurt to do the work. Lance sound like a douche delivery guy. Bella got a massive upgrade. Just saying.

I know she has pregnancy hormones but I really want to slap her ass silly. He has shown her more love and respect than she has shown him. He should be running.

So was Edward the little boy who moved away who was Bella’s best friend at five and his mom was her moms friend? And is Bella going to run because of some bullshit?I swear I’ve had the worse luck with runaway Bella stories lately. I want a strong stand up for herself Bella who doesn’t run but fights for what she wants. Please *raises hands in supplication* :-)

Thank goodness I was wondering how long she was going keep being cold fish/distant thing going. I mean he’s hot, educated, good job and family, your husband, you live with him, he rubs you feet and feeds your cravings. Come one no more cold shoulder. You are having his babies girl!

Have to say the plot is a g oood one. However the writing is not. So I'm going to bow out now. I'm sure you've improved your writing in the last 12 years, but can't continue with this one too many errors

They having twins.

Oh Edward so nice.

I like them.

I like,nice and I enjoy this chapter.