Reviews for The Dance
FearOfDeathIsIllogical chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
A great story. Very good.
PollyWantCookie chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
I saw you in a forum and decided to read a bit of your work. Now: I can't see were this is going and I'm constantly not reading the Manga-names you use (I don't like Manga), but it is somewhat interesting and I would like to read a next chapter.
Lady Sakia chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
Well Jonas...

I must say you have me intrigued. The plot line is proceeding nicely, and the grammar and structure of the story is excellent. I also like the cadence of the piece. It does not proceed to fast.

All in all I am impressed, Really I mean it.

Keep it up.
Emperor Sunny chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
An interesting concept. As a character, you modeled the Prince very well. I still don't like him.
Kristine93 chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
This story is really cool and so capturing! you've got such a rich vocabulary! Leila's got one hell of a temper... And that dude with the claws *shiers*. You're an awsome author. I hope you update this soon.