|Reviews for A Layer of Dust|
| Elliot Bowers chapter 1 . 3/29/2002
_Not bad, this was not bad at all. But I just
can't say that; I have to back what I say. Let
me just say-to begin-that there were some problems.
Some words-a few-were misspelled and out of
place. For example, you wrote "shortie" instead
of "sortie": Gally is a "shorty," and a "sortie"
is a quick and short trip." (C'est comme "sortir,"
n'est-ce pas?) And, there were some punctual
stutters, just SOME errors... That was the bad.
_Now, about the GOOD. This was, overall, a GOOD
work. It was slow, compared to general Gunnm
fanfics, but that was good...very good. We saw
quite good settings for musings on the past, on
troubles, and past troubles. And, we as readers
saw the slow beauty of the meditative thoughts.
In "short," so to speak, your work fit the title.
Indeed, this was not bad at all. Right now, I'll
be running off-before Gally has my head for calling
her a "shorty!"
| daisukefire chapter 1 . 9/25/2001
Pretty dang good, I liked it.