Reviews for Flirting 101 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cute and silly. I really liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just ignore that guy that called this story BS. He didn’t even have the Stones (no reference to Aelita intended) to post review with a username. That being said, there is quite a bit of derp that goes on with both Aelita and Jeremy, but I think that’s quite acceptable in a romantic comedy like this. Ultimately you have made a fun little romp that I’ve now read a couple of times! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly I am reading this whole story again and again and again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great love story. |
![]() ![]() Bullshit. Complete, unfettered, rancid and decomposing bullshit. There is absolutely no way this side of HELL that Aelita and Jeremie did not recognise one another's voices. All the time they've been in love? Their endless canon conversations and close group of friends that know each other better than anybody else in the entire school? Are you seriously trying to peddle this moronic fallacy that two people who are absolutely head over heels with each other and spend every other moment together do not recognise the voice of the other one? Because, madam, I am not buying it. Even a REGULAR couple wouldn't have that issue, let alone these two when you remember that Jeremie was Aelita's ONLY outside source of conversation when she was trapped in Lyoko for months and months on-end! I don't know if I should laugh, cry, roll my eyes or slap the keyboard with my face. I may very well do all four. On a general note, I don't know what to make of this story, I truly do not. Sometimes what you write is good, sometimes it is great, and sometimes it is shoehorned and clichéd nonsense. On the truly bad occasions, you rely solely on annoying gender tropes and the stupidity of all those involved in whatever harebrained scheme each group of 'teachers' is plotting. Those female teachers are all completely abhorrent, by the way, and your decision to remove Yumi from this story is utterly baffling, given her role in the lives of both characters. I'm sure you would argue that that was the reason - to make things more 'difficult', but it is, in fact, a cheap plot device through and through. Extremely disappointing. I don't even know if I'll bother with the finale. This story is wasted potential. It started well, and went downhill faster than the American political system when they elected Trump. |
![]() ![]() Those girls are all fucking assholes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermoso, simplemente hermosos, me quedo sin palabras me encanta sique asi deverias hacer coqueteo 103 con Odd y Sissi. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I guess Ulrich and Odd and everyone else can happily announce: "Mission Accomplished" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there a sequel to this with Yumi and Ulrich? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was the best bit of fluff I've read in a really long time! It was perfect timing for me as well. I've been going through a bit of a rough time at home and this was the perfect pick-me-up. It made me feel fuzzy all the way from my head to the tips of my toes :) There was enough angst and drama that it kept it interesting, but the happy ending was just sublime. I'll re-read this whenever I need a pick-me-up. |
![]() ![]() Hilarious |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cant wait for the next chapter! You're a great writer and I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aelita...run like hell. (although we all know she doesn't..XD) Epicness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really really well done, I enjoyed it quite a bit. Only complaint is it is a tad bit drawn out. Other than that, It could've been a moonscoop script. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I spy a title drop! |