Reviews for Little Brother
not someone of importance chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
nice work
PrincessVictory chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Awww! I found this completely by accident and thought it was so sweet!:D You have a very beautiful writing style and I like the whole second-person point of view thing. :)
BlackRoseFire chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
Wow that was really deep.
KyoudaiDoushi chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
Cute. A little strange, but cute.
yamina-chan chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
There are at least two Mews in this world, since the one in the Lucario Movie is diffrent, but I got your point.

A nice story, which makes you think.

You did a good job, in my oppinion.
danthefan2015 chapter 1 . 1/2/2008

Secrets are dishes best served cold.
Galbinus-Rayquaza chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
OMG. ;_; that was so sweet.

no complaints AT ALL. :o You portrayed the two legendaries VERY well, and I quite liked the writing style. :D So you must've succeeded. .

There's one typo, though, thought I'd point it out.. in the beginning-ish part of the story, you wrote 'bear' as 'bare'. But apart from that, it was flawless.

Anyway. I hope that more people will write stories like this, because, ironically enough, the Pokemon Fanfiction community is sort of lacking them..


T-TrainOrTurkeyT chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
That was supposed to be a confrontation between Mew and Mewtwo, wasn't it? I liked it though. It was well written.