Reviews for Desperation
Alyss Penedo chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
...And then DiZ shows up. XD

What is this "Waiting" that keeps cropping up? I don't think I see it on your list of stories...
inhx chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
I don't know why I'm suddenly drawn to this story, but I am.

...

xoxo
Axel's Ashes chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Ha! Kind of dark. I always find myself feeling bad for Axel, though. ;
kurosora1984 chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Duude. So I was all like, PROCRASTINATE! And so I went to YOUR PAGE and was like, CHOOSE AT RANDOM! *scroll scroll finger jab at screen* One chapter? DAMNIT WANTED TO PROCRASTINATE LONGER.

But oh, this was some very condensed goodness. COMPACT AND STUFFED WITH EMOTION AND TENSION. You're a genius. XD

I need to play the game again so bad now. *weeps* DAMN YOU WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!

*glomp* In short - LOVE IT. XD
Jacqueline King chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Nice. You captured the actual Axel from the game, and at the same time gave him more to his character than they allow (considering it's, y'know, a kid's game... which still makes me laugh, by the way. They create characters like Axel who are anything but innocent and wonder why people think Disney has a bit of a sick mind...).

Anyways, good characterization. Nice little drabble.

- Jacqueline.
Angel of Lavender chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
thats...intense. Yes, rape is bad, but I can't say 'shame on you!' for writing it. It would make me horribly hypocritical. ya know, me reading it and all.

Your writing is oh so lovely. I can't wait to read everything else.
dreamercat21 chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
AWESOME! I would like a chapter 2 but i'm just going to live! lol
accountdeleted111 chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
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Spinestalker chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
I always figured if they had done this in the game, Roxas would have remembered a lot faster. I do so love these little what-if, could-haves, and seeing one from you delights me. I liked this, even if it wasn't Waiting.
Fuchannini chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
Hi there,

First of all, I love your writing style. I know you probably hear this a lot, but hey, I bow to you. The one thing in particular is the way that you portray the Nobodies. You really have the feeling/no feeling thing down to an art. In reality, I could not see Axel violate Roxas, but as a Nobody who doesn’t feel, well there is that grey area and you tackled it well. I personally will not get my head around the feeling/not feeling due to the problems that I have with the plot of KH2 in general. Anyways, thanks for your sweet stories.

Fuchannini
Angel of The Fallen Stars chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
I didn't even get an e-mail for your update, so I wasn't sure if I read this already... Anyway, that was... ahem. It was definitely dark and passionate in the 'I'll rape you so you regain your memories of me and shit like that'. I hope that made sense. I liked it, cause I'm like that. And I don't think I'm making any sense. I don't even think I am making sense to myself. My brain is just mush today. This is what I do know, I liked it, and I am happy you wrote something. Yay. I hope this review makes sense to you, and maybe get a laugh out of it. Yeah, I don't know else what to write, and I've basically lost my train of thought. Nice one shot! Bye!
Yakkai-The-Inu chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
Wow. I'm not really sure how this makes me feel. It's kind of liek this great amalgamation of many different feelings. You are very talented with words. Axel and roxas should belong to you :O I like it better that way.

But really. You can feel Axel's cool frustration and desperation, but you wonder how Roxas really feels. Is he scared? Does he feel violated, is he crying? Then again, Axel must be dying on the inside. Such powerful emotions you can put into such short pieces.
Naraxkagura chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
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DD;

That was exactly the face I made. Ha.

Wow I love it. Simply loved the intensity. The agony. MM. It's the best. Wow I can totally see that happening. Delicious angst. Dammit, why do you write so good? It's like...amazing. And so was this. I think this one has to be my favorite of yours so far. YUPP.

Okay, have a nice day I'm gonna go read some more of your fics. :)
firelid chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
...squabbling incoherent...
Valas chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
So when I've read in the description of this story: "It's time for a different approach." I thought that you're trying out a new writing style in this one-shot, but reading the story everything was explained in this sentence: "... he’d already tried to beat the memories into the younger Nobody with steel and flame – it was time for a different approach." Well, I'm glad that your writing style hasn't changed, because you know that I think that your writing is great.

And now to say something about the story itself. I saw that many girls have said that it was intense, yes, I think so too. But for me there were some other feelings involved too, because all the time that I was reading this story I was thinking to myself "Come on Roxas, kick him where it hurts!" I don't know, but to me this all thing was screaming "rape", and I'm not quite comfortable when it comes to reading stories (or watching movies) with rape in it. But, as you said, Axel tried more appropriate approach (steel and flame) and he failed ... so, I guess that desperate times calls for desperate measures.

Bye, for now :)
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