Reviews for Edge Of Victory 1 Conquest (the untold story)
shaina chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
careful of the grammer - it's annoying but its absence makes a story impossible to read.
Sarge3 chapter 1 . 4/16/2002
The story was good I'll give you that but it was unenjoyable because its all one big massing paragraph that makes it a littlle hard to follow. BUt you accomplised the one thing thats hard for me to do I could see Anakin and Tahiri bothh saying those things(I try to avoid this problem by making my own charachters). Specially after there little thing in that locker on the space station :)
Jimaine chapter 1 . 3/18/2002
Um - screwy format. Other than that, I liked it!
D3lete Accountplease chapter 1 . 12/30/2001
This fic has alot of potential, but dont post again until you find a good beta reader.
shinigami24 chapter 1 . 10/12/2001
i did not understand this fic at all

it makes totally no sense

this is more like a scribbled paragraph than

a fanfic

if you don't agree

then say so
JadeShadow chapter 1 . 9/3/2001
Short-but you have a LOT of potential! :-) off to read more
Lena chapter 1 . 9/1/2001
Perhaps the coolest story ever written, deep and leaves you wanting more. Written by a truly accomplished young writer!
Tahiri Solo chapter 1 . 9/1/2001
Hey girl! Love your fic! I can totally see them both doing all this, very in character and very sweet! Sorry this review is short but I want to go and read your other story! SO KEEP WRITING!