|Reviews for A Simple Mistake, a Twist In Fate|
| Gelado Pocket-mouse chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
My complaint is that you haven't continued this. However, that can easily be fixed. Proceed.
| Shadowed Nightwings chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
| InheritanceArtist chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
I like this. I really like this. You happened upon a great idea when you thought of this story. The whole consept of the story progreesing from here will allow for Eragon and Arya's relationship to progress on a much more... pleasent level. Update, FAST!
| Adurna Eldrvarya chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Please update soon!
| Lord Hallowell chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
Intresting turn of events. The whole Arya carried with the egg in the spell is uniqe. If you have ever seen Charmed on TNT it reminds me on when a whitelighter carries a charge (whitelighter is gaurdian angel charge is the person he/she watches over) along in his orb trail.
| Serena530 chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
I like this. I'm curious to see what happens next. Please post again soon. )
| Raven of Alaska chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
Eragon flirting with Arya. Arya talks to Brom. Eragon is left clueless. Very good, so far. Hope to see the next chapter soon!
-Raven of Alaska
| Thoral chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
very good start cant wait for next.
| kalinnnnn chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
Wow I really enjoy this idea. Thats a really good start, hope you continue even better!