Reviews for My Hero
Corpusclockwork chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
When Roy started crying I lost it. Elysia and Roy stories are just so painful... I really should go to bed now but sleep is for the weak xD
Sarah Archer chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand now I'm crying. Beautiful story!
Unadulterated chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
... Ouch.
Like, really, ouch.

Good! I liked it, I can definitely see litte Elysia growing up and writing this. I can see Gracia beginning to cry and Roy going all sad on us all over again.

I loved the A and little scribbled sad face. I would have liked to see the teacher's reaction other than that. Good work! :) [or maybe :(]
IamKix chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
That was really well written.

I feel so sorry for her D:

Never growing up with her Daddy... Who would've always been there for her

*Cries* It's so sad T_T
Anana553 chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
loved it!

so beautiful

poor Elysia :(

hughes was so awesome! i thechnically cryed when he died -_-
great gospel chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
This was beautiful, simply beautiful. :]


Falcon Rider22-23 chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
good job.
Imgonenowgoodbye12345 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
I've read this before...gosh...and it touches my now like it did back then...Love it! Although I think Elicia should remember her father a little, and not only the stories she's been told about him.
defrastriche chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Aw. This was so sad.

I nearly cried.

If there was a song playing, [I would cry. Really].

But, the way you worded it, it seemed really true.

As if a person had experienced it and written it in her own diary. :(


Keep making more of these. :)

I love FMA because I think.. it has many things related to the real world. [except Alchemy. :)]

It gives us many teachings. Like how Maes Hughes was a very good and loyal friend..


*reads again*
JoPo08 chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
This was adorable!
tewak chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
It's so sad! I literally cried when reading this and I still am crying *sniff* Your way of words is so beautiful and amazing :) It's just so amazing, and sad..
SongoftheDarquePhoenix chapter 1 . 12/8/2007
You nearly made me cry- that was amazing.
Jedi Knight Cheeze chapter 1 . 11/18/2007

Poor Elysia. :( That was sweet. Well written!
MithLuin chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
It is so sad to think that she'll grow up not knowing him, but I'm glad she's heard many stories about her hero of a father.
TheQueenOfMediocrity chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
aw! that was so sad and sweet. it was very nicely written, too. :D
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