|Reviews for Untitled|
| Hollowellow chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
Great start, only like 2 or three mistakes that I caught, like "She found her mind suddenly stick to the past week" stick should be stuck, and to should be in, and maybe try refrazing it like, "Suddenly she found her mind stuck in the past week..." Or you could just fix the first part, either way it makes sense.
Other than that its goin good, keep it up :)
Thanks for the review and compliment on my 'Nyx' picture, it gives me a warm fuzzy feeling :3. I'm ALMOST DONE with the 3rd chapter of K.N.I.L haha, acronyms, so much fun, I just have to put in the start of the next chapter so I can go off of that. As for my Inuyasha story, its been a long time since I've messed with it. I wrote it what 2, 3 years ago? I don't know if I'm gonna finish it, I might. Its been a while since anyone's looked at it so I kinda just put it on hiatus until one stormy day I felt insperation for it again.
| Dawn Catcher chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Awsome! This is great! Update soon!
| Devin chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
well if u haven't finished the story how about Midnight Marrige
| LadyGeri chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
Great Start! I love theway you set the mood . Can't wait for the rest.
| Miko in training chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
thats great i love it so far update soon :)
| PinkCatsy chapter 1 . 11/18/2007
I like your story so far but you must write way more!