Reviews for Track Star
acullenfan chapter 9 . 2/28/2013
wow. is al i can say. write more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zz.
krotoxo chapter 5 . 11/9/2012
:D my science teacher's name is Mr. Slater
ps its really well written. great job :)
krotoxo chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
Ahahaah ewwwww!
cool story :) very entertaining
AnnabethnAliceLuvr chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
maybe it's just me but how did mike know bella had the brownies? are cheetos some kind of hint?

sorry, i'm really slow and stuff w/ stories... :D

i LUV it though! it's hilarious how mike always gets in trouble, though i feel bad 4 him w/ the gatorade and stuff... :D

2 cool job!

-*annabethnaliceluvr!*- :D
tirra.storm chapter 9 . 10/17/2009
DSG & OME! this is so damn great! mike totally got what he deserved! i love it!
M-Dub 720 chapter 9 . 4/23/2009
OHMYGOSH! THAT WAS GREAT! SO HILARIOUS!

At some points I almost feel bad for Mike...almost.

I'm kinda disappointed that you're done with this.

I LOVE THIS!

Thank you for the highlight of my day.
chuchuthepichu chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
I love this story and how you make mike mess up on every try he does it was really great
ImJealousOfTheReceptionist chapter 9 . 2/11/2009
ome! hahahahhahahahahha! that is hilarious! loved the whole story!
my name is paper YAH chapter 9 . 12/7/2008
HAHAHA! Eddie and Bella won! BEAT THAT! very funny story with emmett and different POVs
my name is paper YAH chapter 8 . 12/7/2008
emmett? being THAT cool? in your dreams!
my name is paper YAH chapter 3 . 12/7/2008
ooh edward is SO EVIL. giggle
SleathyNinja chapter 9 . 8/11/2008
I LIKE IT THE WHOLE STORY WAS FUNNY! I LIKED THE EMMETT PART!
nibeijia chapter 9 . 7/2/2008
OMG xD LOVE IT
lithium17 chapter 9 . 6/12/2008
funny stuff
The-heart-of-Sekai chapter 9 . 6/1/2008
Lol that was funny, hilarious. I love Emmett and his "super powers"! Go Emmett. :P And I never thought it was a bad ending just an ending. Anyway that was fun to read.
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