|Reviews for Naruto: Sand Shinobi!|
| Mars the avenger chapter 29 . 4/22
this is the worst story in all of history.
You kill people here like a butcher does to chickens.
You SUCK SHIT!
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/1/2014
I was going to continue to reading this untill I got to the part with Naruto s affinities. Since its obvious your just going to overpower him, it made this become boring rather quick. You probably also gave him a sword here or later on Again boring and overdone. Naruto always has done fine with out a weapon or mass affinities. Its what makes him such a good character.
| manny chapter 29 . 7/30/2014
Love it I have tears in my eyes from it very good indeed
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/21/2014
Oh fuck you
Suddenly naruto appears?
Sakura tried to kill naruto 2 days ago and she was obsessed over sasuke all her life, and in 2 days she is in love with naruto? Fuck you man
And sasuke has a lightning affinity not a fire one
He could do fire ball jitsu cuz he had learnt to do it since he was a kid and he was a uchiha
I suggest you read naruto carefully
And gamabunta is the chief toad he won't just agree to be some personal transport for two brats
This story leaves a bad taste in my mouth
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/21/2014
Come on man!
Its like a yaoi fix without the sex
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/22/2014
Hinata is described in one word ...stupid,
Holy hell she just sits there and watches naruto go through life never once telling him, how she feels or giving him encouragement I honestly don't blame hiashi for smacking her aside... She got killed by SAKURA, the same kunoichi whose only useful Justus are the academy three. They teach those to KIDS damn
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/22/2014
You know what my reaction would have been to tell hinata to fuck off, I mean she just sits there and does nothing to ever help or encourage him what the FUCK
| Guest chapter 29 . 4/9/2014
amazing story i was captivated
| SliverWolfAlpha chapter 29 . 3/4/2014
T.T that was epic
| TheMysteries chapter 5 . 2/21/2014
I read up to the 5th chapter just because I liked the first chapter. The first chapter had alot of potential for a great story... The best part was when you killed Hinata. I really like her but not alot of writers would just kill her off. However after reading the chapters after that I think it would have been better if you could have made temaris and narutos relationship a bit more beliveable than it is right now. I know this story is over but I hope you see this so you can make better stories in the future...Good Luck
| Septimus Shadows chapter 3 . 8/16/2013
Absolutely love the story and pairing. But please check grammar a bit more carefully as a friendly heads up. Keep it up
| AeroSpeedNinja chapter 29 . 7/20/2013
AWESOMNESS EMOTIONESS BEST STORY EVER SHOULD BE ON THE NEWS XD
| Franjo chapter 29 . 7/6/2013
Some of story are very good, it was ok that Hinata and Sakura end the villians died. But not the another ones(well except maybe Jiraja, I mean he is dead in the real story). That Naruto VS Fox Kyubbi is not good, it would be better like in the orgnial story the realationship between Killer Bee and his eight tailed beast.
| kyokunkunoichi chapter 29 . 5/20/2013
This story shouts angst, angst angst, depression and 'tragical happy ending' interesting project it was, it's all I can say.
| onijutsu chapter 16 . 5/6/2013
So the chunin exams... yeah... that was stupid. Naruto just killed how many kids? for what exactly? a vest? a rank? he just slaughtered small kids for a rank, a rank that he exceeds. a rank that should have been given to him through a field promotion, not through slaughter.
Aspects of this story are becoming very unorganized and sloppy. I honestly don't even know the main plot at this point, what is he working towards? he is destroying everything, nothing seems to be a challenge. The characters are emotional wrecks most of the time or are such airheads that only say lines that need to be said then the scene is over.
Pretty sure 1-16 could be cut in half at this point and just reconstructed into a better base to grow from. Naruto's relationship is so weird, all they do is kiss, and their relationship is based off of Naruto saving Gaara or something. What else has the couple done besides Temari meeting Naruto at the door, they kiss, there always seems to be a couch there, then she makes breakfast and he leaves. Literally this is all I know of their relationship. It just repeats every time they are together, this is not a relationship.
I'm still hoping that the story picks up and follows a main plot somewhere, maybe it will become a little more serious?