|Reviews for Redemption|
| MagicalJoy chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
Wonderful scene, thank you for writing it, your descriptions put the readers into the mind of Tom Carrisford with ease, making us feel his anguish. Well done!
| Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
This was excellently written! Like you, I've been a fan of ALP for almost as long as you have. It feels like you've put in missing piece that should be, but wasn't in the original book. I look forward to any other of your stories based on this wonderful, original book.
-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.
| misakigirl chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Wow! Loved it! I really liked how you expressed Mr. Carrisford's thoughts during those long months... how difficult it must've been... and how he remembers Sara...
Since I was little I have loved the story and I always thought it was really sad Mr. Carrisford's one mistake brought so much misery upon all the involved (himself, sara and her father and even Ram-Dass and Mr. Carmichael and his family)
It was really nicely done, especially at the end when he at last gets a spark of hope.
| ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
A great story. Very good.
| deactivate-account chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
I liked this very much. The last line was perfect.
| Ranuel chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
I would have liked to have seen more of Carrisford in the novel as well. This is a very good try at filling in a gap that needs filling.
| Rose Black chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
I quite like this! (In a sad way.) It would be lovely if you used this to start an ALP category in the Book section of the site, too.
| Grignard chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
Great story. It's always nice to read more about the Indian Gentleman. You kept it within the book-verse and captured the angst well. Keep writing!
| Mongie chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
Aw, poor Carrisford. I really liked this look into his mind, how he was so tortured, and that's why he didn't remember there was a girl at first. I feel sorry for him. :( Yay bee fic! Yay bee fic in a new fandom!