Reviews for Modern Day Romance
Victoria chapter 13 . 11/10/2008
I am absolutely in love with this story and I loved the last part of 13 and I even looked up itachi's ringtone i am way to much in love
NamineNasha chapter 13 . 11/3/2008
Mr. Ken the Black Cat please update your killing me please I beg of you you got the best Itachi story I've read I bet you would do an excellent story of Grimmjow from Bleach
Ryoutas chapter 12 . 9/9/2008

This durned site erased half my review in the previous one..._

Ok so I went on to rant about chapter 13. Can I remember what I said? I'll try lol. Yes so, in the first bit Itachi scared me and pissed me off at the same time. But I guess he can't help it if he's deprived in the bedroom...or the bathroom, or the store's changing room or whatever XD. (I bet his fangirls would be glad to see to it 3) Erm, revenge...yes precious yes. I was like "Yaya!" And then you had me wondering what wickedness those two were up to. Itachi at work is very smexy! Him at his desk all stern and concentrating...*shudders* lol.

Erm, yes so...the last part in that chapter was very sweet and so cute. Vulnerable Itachi is just so irresistable and a must-see!

So yes, I had an idea. Why not make our dearest Itachi sick in a future chapter. To show more vulnerability on his behalf. *nods* I can just see him, all snifflish, flushed and puffy and absolutely adoreable when he's refusing medicine. Aw! *sniffle* What do you think? Is it good? O_O


Ryoutas chapter 13 . 9/9/2008

First off, I am SO-O-O-O sorry I took so long to review. My life has been hellish-ly active as of late and I'm trying to get accustomed to this new moving about...bustling activity. LOL. I'm talking about school xD.

Second off...chapter 12 was dedicated to me especially? *watery eyes* Aweh! Teeheehee... 3 Ok, well that chapter was cute. At first I was..."OMG Sasuke's in this chapter...O_O Why? What mischief is the little devil up to now?" Lol, but then it was fun and cute, with him and Hikari trying to socialize and then succeeding haha. The scene with Rentaro flying into Hikari's arms had me laughing...she sounds like my friends and I. Oh and I almost forgot, Sasuke is very desirable when he's intimidating. X3 Btw, those songs that they danced to are awesome!
Kalika Barlow chapter 13 . 9/7/2008
Awesome story. Love your OC. Really well constructed and I love how Itachi is OOC, but still in character. I hope to see more of this story :D

unknown player chapter 13 . 9/6/2008
hahaha.. what happened to having revenge! lol..

revenge revenge revenge! ))
luv4peace chapter 13 . 9/5/2008
aw...i luv the last bit, awesomely sweet, though i look forward to lemons, i think there shld be more fluff like tat XD Cute chapter overall
Rodidor chapter 13 . 9/4/2008
aw that last paragraph was soo sweet
Rodidor chapter 11 . 8/31/2008
i thought i reviewed


lol update soon and i luffed this chapter it was extremely funny i even looked up that song for itachi's ringtone
BlueEyesBabyGirl chapter 11 . 8/23/2008
I love this storey! it's Amazing that she isn't Pregment yet. lol.
unknown player chapter 11 . 8/22/2008
lol! that's his ringtone? funneh! )
Siry.Pop chapter 11 . 8/22/2008
hahahaha Amazing!

and she's not pregnant but oh well I wanted you to scare them a bit.

well that was a great chapter, hot and funny. plese update as soon as you can, we'll be waiting for the next chappie. Take care!
Ryoutas chapter 11 . 8/22/2008
HA HA HA! This chapter was frakking awesome. Though I must say this, w t f Hikari is a bit clueless. Obviously...Itachi would only take a day off to spend it with her...ALONE. But it was good nonetheless. :P And I guess Itachi's kinda like the typical boyfriend once he gets into Victoria's Secret...XD! It was smexy, fun and kawaii. Uber awesome comination. Usually I'd leave longer reviews but I'm tired and lazy right now. *yawn* So yeah, I loved this update. ( was late. *scolds*) XD
NamineNasha chapter 3 . 8/21/2008
Are you going to write a wedding for Hikari and Itachi?
unknown player chapter 10 . 7/27/2008
damn.. that was hott.. lol..
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